Beneath the mask

Beneath the mask

A Poem by ROSALIND

Can I give you the benefit of the doubt
Will you remember me in 40 years time 
 If so how will you react when you look at me .
You won't freak out.
Because I have changed a lot 
I don't look the same 
I certainly don't feel the same 
Take me as you find me 
Or don't bother me at all.
"I don't answer" to anyone but me.
I like being me 
I see by your eyes 
You look troubled in your mind.
Please don't worry about me.
I can take care of me.
I just need you to try  and understand me.
Although I can see you disapprove of me.
Somewhat completely disappointed in me.
Well the last thing I need right now.
Is a complete rejection of  me 
Look around and you will see more of me .

© 2023 ROSALIND


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Is hard at times to refute other people's behaviour and reactions.. is hard o avoid focussing on how one feels over and over again upon how hurt or offended one can become at times. Your poem is full of doubts and yet requests same time.. defiance and sadness make sad bedfellow at times, don't they, Roalind.. bless your great yet fragile heart.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Rosalind,

This wonderfully expressive Poem does well to represent my personal Motto to the World of Humanity that I do love, but also do forbid to exclude and omit my own personal person's individual individuality's life lived as that one and only person of uniqueness that I am, and shall always remain, and forever be ... As a Fan of Humanity's, The Human Race, I read and hear you loud and, most respectfully, clear ... Never back up, and never give up, being that is which the fullest expression of, "To thine ownself be true ..." ... Great Write! ...

Marve

Posted 1 Year Ago



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Added on September 26, 2023
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ROSALIND
ROSALIND

EDINBURGH, lothian , United Kingdom



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Hello my name is Rosalind and I first started writing poetry in April of 2011. I am a born again Christian and have a wonderful relationship with father God I would have never imagined for one second.. more..

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