Voices In the dark..

People are crying out in pain abuse depression loneliness drugs

Voices in the dark
they stumble over each other
there cries are not heard
trapped in a air tight vase
Imbedded tight sealed
their souls cannot escape
the torrent of darkness
deep within their own souls.
Fighting to break free
But enslaved to there own
misery of addiction
The pain lingers on and on ..
Until the voices are heard no more 

Reviews

[Nidheesh Sankaran]

The theme was nice ....... a person a slave to drugs........... addiction......captive..........jailed......... is shouting for release........ moksha,........ mukti......... freedom........... but......... finally all shouts and cries are left unheard........ !!!! Beautiful theme.......... hope i can also get such writing themes in future.........