Someone is watching?

The sun sets free
the warm rays
washing the tears
of a lonely face
The pale orange
moon sighs with
relief, 
Softly the birds
tweet a lullaby
Secretly the roses
smile 



 

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Reviews

[Marie]

This is very pretty and free from any mistakes.

[Stella Armour]

How soft and gently your words describe the passing from a darkness into a beautiful light. I love how roses secretly smile once the sun comes out....

[iliOZ]

hi rosalind
this is so interesting ... i mean when i read your poem i probably would have a picture in my mind, in fact it may have been similar to the one you attached, but it is so matching. i arrived to a rhyme than looked down
i am almost certain i heard the birds in the background and i could even smell nature
so i am saying writing these beautiful descriptive words is one thing, finding the matching picture is an art on its own
wonderful