Last song of the dying willows

Weeping willow it's leafs are badly torn-en
Wilted away lying grieving all alone
Down the lake they travel to a resting place
Broken  bruised they lie stripped of all
their grace....
Weeping willows the birds are sad
For they have died of a broken heart


 

Reviews

[ROSALIND]

Someone has been mucking around with the rating on my poem.? ITS SEEMS ODD AS MY RATING WAS A LOT HIGHER I DON'T UNDERSTAND ..!!!

[Dr. Wood ?]

wow......so much in so small a space.....the best yet from you in my humble opinion

[Basu Gupta]

damn emotional.....i love the theme and the ultimate comparison part....
simple short yet atmosphere creating and amazing...
keep writing..

[iliOZ]

i love the sentiment, the tone is very close to what i like to sound myself.
thanks.

/i think you meant to say "they lie" rather than "they lye" although i have to admit, you made me think a few seconds about the usage/

[ROSALIND]

Than you I changed the spelling :)