ROSA'S HAUNTED PAST.....

Waiting there in the railway station, a tall handsome young boy glanced over. She held a dark secret that must not be discovered. Was she in danger.? . Rose's past must be kept hidden. Loudly steered in the train puffing and panting with all its might. Rosa feet moved quickly and she hurried onto the moving train little did she know the young boy stood close behind her he hid in the next compartment, hoping that she see him. Rojas's eyes wilted into a deep sleep time had forgotten her past. The engine came to sudden haul, Rosa sprang quickly to her feet and she grabbed her belongings and ran down the long corridor to her surprise she noticed the same young man who waited close by her at the railway station. She nervously looked away. Rosa dreaded one thing her past. moments later she was ushered into a taxi and she headed home to her aunts cottage.



 The clock in the drawing room chimed half past nine. Rosa walked gracefully into her Aunts drawing room but she was a little apprehensive she sat down on the fireside chair and raised her head at the rearrangement
of her mothers furniture. The wind howled from the back porch and she wondered if she had made the right decision coming back to her old roots. Maybe it was time to flee....
Her journey had some what tired her out. Soon she breathed a sigh of relief as she snugged down underneath the downy covers and fell soundly asleep. The next morning Rosa awoke to hear the birds chirping a romantic song. Rosa yawned,and stretched her legs. Suddenly there was a loud tap on the door.
"Do come in she replied"
"Madam can I draw back these curtains. nervously the maid said."
"Why thank you can put my breakfast tray over there on the table."
"Is their anything else that you require Madam."
"Nothing else at the moment smiled Rosa."

The sun gleamed through her aunts drawing room and soon yesterdays worries were all forgotten Rose thoughts had been judgmental. Perhaps she would settle down, to her new way of life. If only she could foresee her future. Rose tearfully looked out of the window after having a instant flashback of her teenage years. One that she wasn't proud of, she felt nothing but shame. Her Father only wanted to protect her. But now it was too
Late the consequences of that night affected her present life. The past must never be allowed to catch up with her. She couldn't be a mother now it had destroyed her soul.
Rose felt somewhat cheated. and if fate should somehow be kind to her again. Given half the chance Rose would snap it up.
But after her ordeal and the injuries she sustained, Rose will never be able to give birth again. This broke her heart into many pieces. She had given birth to twins, the baby girl had died and the baby boy survived. She was far to young. Her Father had made arrangements for the child to be adopted with suitable parents who could provide a secure and stable up bringing. Rose felt so alone, being robbed of her twins one lost to child birth and the other taken away how could she ever forget her sordid past. Rose just wanted to forget, But somehow it was coming back to haunt her.






Several dark long days had passed and Rosa busied herself in the kitchen preparing the meat pie for dinner. Molly the kitchen maid lay ill in her bed upstairs and her Aunt was to frail to help with the cooking. Rosa breathed a sigh of relief when she had finished baking the meat pie for dinner. She pulled out the tea caddy from the cupboard and made herself a delightful twining s tea, Rose made some hot toast with honey and sat down at the kitchen table feeling lonely. she longed for the cool summer nights. But it was still a cold chill in the air. Her aunt sat in the front drawing room a Rosa took her up some tea and gently knocked on the door.
"Do come in My child.' could you please draw the curtain over a bit my head feels like it is about to burst open."
"Oh dear.' Auntie I am sorry I'll go and fetch your pills."
"thank you Rose"
That was the fist time her Aunt called her Rose. maybe Her aunt Had a change of heart. The years had gone by so quickly
Rose's aunt spent a lot of time in her bed. Molly spent nearly all day fetching and carrying until the sun hid behind the pale moon light. Molly looked rather pale so Rosa told her she could be released from her duties. She polity smiled and made her way upstairs to her room in the attic. The rain lashed onto the window
sill Rose's thoughts were on her son whom she had never seen, since the day he was born. She still longed for him to come looking. That kept her spirits alive. Moments later there was a loud knock on the door. Rose opened the door, There stood a young man the one that she had seen at the railway station. Rosa glanced awkwardly at the young mans face and then asked him a question.
"Have I met you before." she said."
Yes I do believe we have." 

After standing gazing at the young man she invited him in. Rosa felt a bit panicky, Who was he, and what on earth did he want.
She asked the young man if he was hungry. He said no that he had just finished his dinner at the hotel.
"But I could murder a cup of tea. he replied.
" Please excuse me I won't be long."
Normally Molly maid  made the tea, But she was away for the weekend on leave and wouldn't be back until Monday morning.
Quickly she placed the teapot onto the tray along with some chocolate biscuits. Nervously she walked into the living room.
The conversation felt rather tense and while Rosa slipped her tea and plunged her biscuit into her tea.
Adam looked at Rosa and sighed deeply.
" And he blurted out are you my mother,?
" Surely you-------can't be.!        
"Mother look at me I am Your son."
She looked at him tearfully and her son embraced her tightly like a mother and son should. He just said hush I know the past and i want to put this all behind us.
Rosa looked at him and she couldn't believe that fate had bought him back for good...... the end .......

 

Author's Note

Will carry on with the next update soon .............

Reviews

[ROSALIND]

the final end to Rosa's haunted past...............concluding part ......

[ROSALIND]

I think this is the best second story that I have written, please help me by giving me your opinions I value them and look forward to hearing from my friends on Writers-cafe ...Cheers Rosalind Alexander....

[ROSALIND]

No I didn't think that at all.. here was a comment i got from a friend on Face-book ....
Thanks for sharing, such a touching story it captured me right from the start. Thanks once again and may God grant all your efforts with success.
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Thanks!, i love stories so much I've just read it and it's so capturing n inspiring right from the beginning keep them coming please and just to ask, what should i do to follow your stories and keep getting them?

[Mauricio Montoya]

there's something missing in the second line
( She held a dark secret one had______ must be never discovered She held a dark secret one had must be never discovered ) or I could be wrong, I usually don't read stories but i was drawn to this one, maybe because it a short piece,great starting point, it got my attention and I started to visualize as I read on, so like how this write comes together but there seem to something missing in between lines for some reason but thats just me I don't write stories cause I'm not good at it, so who am I to say. I think you're doing great bringing this write together, get the bugs out. And keep on writing. Mauricio