In The palm of the Fathers arms...

Often we forget to rest our weary souls.

It is my love that takes you to much deeper places
Don't take reckless impulsive steps into a to mans land
Which carry huge big disappointments.
But seek wisdom in everything You do.
For the evil one seeks to destroy us 
Just keep a careful watch
In everything that You do.
so in days when life is stressed.
hold on to my hand
"Your disgrace is washed by my blood.
feel my forgiveness."
"You cannot take on the pain of others.
Please bring me your pain and theirs."
He holds my scar and cleans it through
and through.
"I HAVE PAID THE PRICE FOR YOU.
DO YOU THINK THAT YOU HAVE SHOCKED ME.
I Know all of yours sins
there is nothing that you cannot hide from me"
The river of my presence rests in your brow.
"child the river runs full all the time.
You aren't designed to go without.
My fullness is destine for eternity
My river will never run dry.
I will not limit what I can do through you
and in You.
"Come child and take my hand.
but would you not like to stay here
in the palm of my hand and
rest your weary soul."
 

Reviews

[Scytheriax]

Absolutely lovely poem.
I love the diction to the piece.
"Don't take reckless impulsive steps into a to mans land.
Which carry huge big disappointments."
The period in the first line should be removed, or else you may need to change the formatting of the next line.
You also skipped the capitalization in the start of a few sentences.
But overall, it was good.