The Temple of Sacred Fires

The Temple of Sacred fires is what is known as a Sapphic verse and is a poem composed by the character of the book to express her loyalty and gratitude for the love of her friends

Fierce and true with love’s loyal flame brave hearts blaze
Bright and bold in sacred hearths sacred fires burn
Fragrant sweet like incense clouds high so they rise- sweet, bold, true and fierce

Brave and bold with sacred love sacred hearts blaze
Strong and deep like Eternal flames Immortal
Beauty blooms fresh Amaranth’s hope Undying-beautiful and brave

Strong and deep our sisters’ love Enduring
Firm and true In Sacred fires forged Unbending
As tempered-steel are these my friends Unflinching-loyal, firm and strong

Reviews

[spunkyleo]

enjoyable poem and good word choice and sentence fluency. keep on rocking your writing.

[Atthis Rose]

thank you friend

[Aethereal]

This poem works for me since its metaphoric mix inspires me to feel how your book's character feels about her loyal friends. To feel is to be. I fully understand what you're doing here. I hope that you add an appendix at the end of your book that goes into some detail about how your sonnets are built.

[Atthis Rose]

hmm? who knows thnx

[Benmar]

You did not plagiarize in this poem right?
Creating original poems like this, with highfalutin words,WOW..nice job

[Atthis Rose]

Well Benmar I will absolutely deny any sort of plagiarism for this poem the work is completly and originally mine

[popourii]

This poem felt very anachronistic to me. Thank you for sharing.
Also I love amaranths. :)

[Atthis Rose]

Yes Popourii the work will sound anachronistic as the subject temple metaphor suggest. but also as i have indicated it is Sapphic in construct

[popourii]

Well I really enjoyed it! Thank you!

[.R]

Originality gets a ten from me I love such poems
I always enjoy reading this kind of stuff

[Atthis Rose]

Thank you my dear. Should you continue you will find yourself rewarded with more of the same.