Tremendous Shopping

It's about Tanzy and Tiny shopping!

Tremendous Shopping

      There was a girl called Tanzy, she likes to go shopping very much. She has a cat called Tiny. One day, Tanzy didn’t have a telephone, so she went to the first shop which is the telephone shop and bought a tiger telephone. Then she went to the second shop that is a tennis shop! And she bought a racket and a ball to play with Tiny. And suddenly, she remembered she didn’t have tissue so she went to the third shop and she bought a pack of tissue. Also there is the fourth shop that sell all kinds of teeth, so when the people lost their teeth, they can go and buy the teeth back! Then Tanzy went to the fifth shop and it is tuna shop and she bought a can for dinner. Also there is some tuna toy! So Tanzy bought a tuna toy for Tiny, she went to the sixth shop, it is a ticket shop! If you lost your ticket, you can go and buy back a ticket and really, before Tiny made Tanzy’s ticket lost! So, Tanzy bought the ticket back! And she was very happy! She skip back home and watch a movie with Tiny! Next, she went to the seventh shop and it is a toy shop! So she bought a make up set and she went to the eighth shop,  and went inside the tickle shop! Inside the tickle shop, it has many games and all of them are tickling games! She played on a question game! If Tanzy took the wrong question, the machine will tickle her one hundred times! Then she went to the ninth shop and she went to a talk-a-lot-shop, inside all of the people are repeating all of the words. Tanzy said “ Of that is fun!” So, she went into a machine and give the money to the people. The machine will make Tanzy repeat and repeat the words again! When she tell the machine stop, then the machine will stop and Tanzy won’t repeat and repeat the words again. At last, Tanzy went to the tenth shop and the tenth shop is the T-shirt shop! She bought a funny T-shirt and the funny T-shirt will speak to Tanzy all the time! Tanzy said “This is the tremendous shopping in the world!” She is so happy at last!

 

 

Reviews

[Jessica]

Yau Yau:
You're so small and you've already known so much vocabs!
KIU(Keeo it up.)

Jessica

[Rosalynd]

Tremendously creative!