Octinnia, Book One, Chapter OneA Chapter by Rosemary Peel1st chapter of this full length fantasy for older childrenChapter One
Her birthday
over for another year, Abbie lay in bed thinking over the day. All in all it
had been good, even if her brother had teased her for saying that she felt more
grown up now that she was thirteen. It was late but she didn’t feel like
sleeping, she’d read for a bit - that always made her drowsy. Then she
remembered she hadn’t tried the new Kindle her parents had given her for her
birthday. There were hundreds of e-books to choose from. She skimmed through
title after title. Why she settled on Octinnia, she didn’t know - she’d felt
drawn to it. Its sub-title intrigued her; “Live
the Adventure”. No sooner had she opened it than everything about her began
to swirl. A bright light filled the room and she had a weird feeling that she
was shrinking. Dizziness made her close her eyes as a sing-song voice began to
chant inside her head, History, Geography,
Legend and Lore; After a few
moments the voice ceased and the spinning stopped. Abbie opened her eyes to
find herself in a large, brightly lit room. Seven other youngsters, three girls
and four boys, stood about, looking as bewildered as she felt. A tall, curly
haired boy grinned at her. He had bright blue eyes, which twinkled when he
smiled. “Weird, eh?”
he said in an American twang. Before Abbie
could reply a disembodied voice echoed around the room, “Your group
is now complete. Please make yourselves comfortable, have some refreshment and
to get to know each other before you begin the first quest.” Three round
tables laden with food suddenly appeared together with several exceedingly
squashy chairs - one for each child. The boy who’d spoken didn’t need to be
asked twice to help himself to food. He’d taken a huge bite of a massive beef
burger before Abbie could stop him, “I shouldn’t
eat or drink anything before we know more about this place.” “That sounds
like right bonza advice, mate.” Another boy agreed. He too was tall but had
short, spiky brown hair and clear grey eyes. He sounded Australian. The first
boy stopped chewing for a moment, hesitated, shrugged his shoulders and then
took another bite, “It’s ok, I
feel fine and they’re the best burgers I’ve ever tasted. I didn’t put any sauce
or anything on but it taste like I did. It’s just the way I like them. I reckon
it’s safe, don’t be sissy.” After
watching him for a few minutes and seeing no ill effects, five of them followed
his lead. Abbie and the brown haired boy hung back. “I’m not
hungry anyway; I was reading in bed when I found myself here.” “In bed? Why,
what time was it where you were?” “Eleven
o’clock at night. I’m from “That’s the
other side of the world from me, my home’s in “Mmm, I
suppose. You have some, if you think it’s safe. I’m really not hungry. My
name’s Abbie by the way, Abigail Illingworth, what’s yours?” “Bruce
McIntosh. No one looks to be poisoned; I think I will risk it.” He sauntered
over to the food. Abbie flopped down in one of the squashy chairs and waited
for them to finish. A short, stocky, dark skinned boy was the first to leave
the tables. He smiled shyly at her. “I’m not too
hungry either, but I thought since we don’t know what’s coming, it might be sensible
to eat something. I heard what you were saying to that boy. I’m Philippe Rocard.
I live in “Your
English is really good. I know some French, we do it at school, but I couldn’t manage
a proper conversation.” “What do you
mean; everyone’s speaking French.” “No, they aren’t.
That blond boy’s American and Bruce is Australian, they’re speaking English - so
are you.” Philippe
looked puzzled, “But I can’t speak English, or not very much I can’t.” Abbie stared
at the rest of the children. They were all talking between mouthfuls and as far
as she could tell, were all speaking English. But to Philippe it was French. They
all looked as if they came from different countries. One of the boys looked Chinese;
a dark haired girl might be Spanish or Mexican, another one looked Dutch,
German or perhaps Scandinavian. There was a beautiful Asian girl, possibly from
“Yes, I
suppose that is weird, but whatever, Abbie, I think you ought to eat something.
We’ve no idea what’s going to happen next. It might be ages before we get the
chance of food again.” “You’re
probably right, I suppose I should try.” She left him and approached the food
tables. There was still plenty of choice. Most of them had finished eating and had
wandered over to the comfy chairs. It seemed however that the American boy possessed
a bottomless pit as he was still shovelling in food.” “Hi again, thought
you didn’t want anything?” he managed to say between mouthfuls. “Philippe, he’s
the dark boy, suggested I should as we don’t know when we’ll get fed again.” “Too right.
That his name, Philippe? You’re Abbie, I heard. I’m Calvin Henderson, Cal. I
come from the States. We live in Abbie picked
at a chicken sandwich, which to her surprise she found totally delicious even
though she hadn’t felt a bit hungry. A bowlful of strawberries and cream proved
scrumptious too. She’d never tasted any as mouth wateringly good. ”Thought you
weren’t hungry.” “I thought
so too, but everything’s so yummy. Amazing isn’t it?” “Sure. You
know, I think this is going to be great fun.” “The song that
played in my head on the way here didn’t sound much fun to me.” “You hear
that too?” “Yes, I
think we all did. It’s all a bit freaky, don’t you think?” “Naa, weird
maybe, not freaky.” “Everybody’s
speaking different languages, but we can all understand each other, if that’s
not freaky, I don’t know what is.” “Yea, well,
I suppose, exciting though, aint it? I can’t wait to find out what happens next.” “We were
told to get to know each other. I think we’re going to have to work as a team.” “If that’s right,
we’ll need a Leader - I think I’d be good.” “We all need
to talk before deciding things like that.” “Thirteen.” “Me too.
When?” “Today -
well, it’ must be yesterday by now.” “Ah, so I’m
older by three months. Let’s ask the others. Bet I’m the oldest.” She gave him
a sideways look and was glad to see that the two remaining empty chairs were not
next to each other. She took one between Bruce and the long haired, blond girl,
leaving “I’m Cal
Henderson, Calvin really but I don’t like that much. I’m thirteen and three
months. What about the rest of you?” “I’ll be
fourteen next month.” Bruce said a smug expression on his sunburnt face. One by one
they introduced themselves. John Hoy,
the Chinese boy, came from “It gets
weirder,” thought Abbie. “Well, what
now? We still haven’t chosen leader.” “Maybe we
won’t need one,” Bea voice sounded a note of common sense, “I should think
they’ll tell us if we do.” The
disembodied voice rang out again and as it did so the food tables disappeared
to be replaced by a single desk on which was a remote control and a mobile cell
phone. Behind the desk a large white screen displayed the words OCTINNIA, THE
FIRST QUEST in vivid colours. Eight faces turned expectantly towards it. The
letters faded to be replaced by a female face. It gazed at each of them in turn
finally stopping on “It has been
decided that you should be the group leader.” “1. Only the
Leader and Second in Command can activate the equipment. “2. Zones
are changed by means of the remote control. You cannot switch zones individually;
only as a complete group. The remote has many uses besides zone changing. You
may like to experiment with it before beginning the first quest. “3. You will
find an identity number on the back of the chairs. The mobile has been preset
with them. Communication is activated when they are pressed. You cannot contact
anyone outside Octinna by this equipment. “4. You will
only be allowed to exit Octinnia upon the completion of all eight tasks. “Calvin,
please collect the equipment. You may begin in your own time. You can return to
the Transit Room at any time by using the remote; pressing PAUSE will
automatically return the whole group to this room. You can also return singly
by holding down the relevant ID number at the same time as activating the PAUSE
facility. Any Questions?” “When you
are all ready press the remote’s ON button followed by number one.” The face
disappeared. The words OCTINNIA: THE FIRST QUEST lit up the screen again. Having first
examined the cell phone “Right then,
I say we go for it - ok? Anybody object?” “I do.”
Bruce looked cross, “I’d like to know what use a single cell phone is?” Instantly the
face reappeared, “Once
activated the phone works by thought transference. You will be able to communicate
without speaking. Texts can also be sent by any of the group simply by thinking
the word text followed by your message. Any other questions?” “Will we move
directly from quest to quest, or come back here in between?” Simran wanted to
know. “That’s up
to you. As I explained, you can return here anytime you wish simply by using PAUSE.
Zones will be visited in order. When you have completed a quest, you may go directly
to next zone by pressing its number. Should you attempt to move on before you
have completed a quest or press a number out of sequence it will have no effect
and you will remain in the zone you are in.” “Anything
else?” “Will we be
told each quest before we enter the zone?” Philippe asked. “No. It is
for you first to discover the quest and then work out how to successfully
complete it.” “Shouldn’t
we see what else the remote can do, before we rush in?” John seemed to be
having difficulty accepting a boy younger than himself as leader. “I really
think we should, “Right, what
shall I try? We know the numbers are to change zones and that PAUSE brings us
back here.” “Try MUTE”
suggested Juanita. “Well, that
was obvious. I expect all the rest are too. FAST FORWARD and REVERSE speak for
themselves. Want to try any more? No? Right then, here goes....” Whilst still
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Added on August 31, 2012 Last Updated on September 1, 2012 Tags: Ancient Greece, friends across the world, team work AuthorRosemary PeelYorkshire, United KingdomAboutI am a long term writer, previously published mainstream and for a year now a published e-book author. Born dyslexic in the days before the disability was recognised it took years to overcome. I wa.. more..Writing
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