The Nightmare of Hell - Part 1

The story of how one ordinary human girl became immortal and more than a plain human. This chapter reveals what Rose dreams about but not giving anything away about what is going to happen.

Chapter 4: The Nightmare of Hell - Part 1

As I slept, I dreamt. I dreamt terrible things happened. Death. Chaos. Change. Choices. And two strangers...

 

This dream was unlike any other dream - nightmare - I had ever had before. It almost seemed as everything in the dream was real. All the pain that was inflicted to me, I felt it - only a little though. My family was trying to save me, while protecting themselves. I had always been shouting to them. "Leave me here! I'm not worth it! Save yourselves!" However, they were not having any off it. They knew that they had only taken me as the strangers had wanted to take away the stronger link. That was what my brother had said about me.

 

This was the strangest dream I had ever had. My big brother's; Morgan, Anthony and Shizuo, were trying to save me while protecting Jynx at the same time. I had been bait for all of them. Maybe even only one of them. I hated seeing them getting hurt and it was hurting me more as I was not able to do anything.

 

In reality, I was tossing and turning as the dream progressed and got worse. I was not enjoying this dream one bit. There was this strange guy - he looked as if he was a neko - and he was trying to kill my big brother - which one however, I couldn't be sure. He had this strange gun... It was apparently, full of silver bullets that had somehow got holy water on or in them. That was something that would be able to kill anyone. Wolf. Demon. Human. Vampire. Dragon. Anything. That was terrible for them. Someone was going to die and I couldn't do anything about it.

 

Author's Note

If there is anything that you think could be made better; grammar, spelling, ideas, etc. please feel free to leave your ideas and changes in comments please and I will take them into consideration and possible change it to what you suggest. This is not fully a Yu-Gi-Oh fanfiction, only parts of this are relating/based on Yu-Gi-Oh and I don't take any credit for those parts. Anything relating/based on any Manga/Anime, I don't take any credit regarding those things.

Reviews

[Perri]

I love this chapter ^^
I've changed little bits here and you can put them in if you think they're good =]
It's really similar and I've based everything on my interpretation of what you wrote;

As I slept, I dreamt. I dreamt of terrible things. Death. Chaos. Change. Choices. And two strangers…

This dream, or rather, nightmare, was unlike any I had had before. It seemed so real, every pain inflicted upon me, I felt the hurting in a way I have never experienced at any other time. My family was trying to protect themselves whilst attempting to save me. I was continuously shouting- screaming- at them to abandon their quest to save me. “Leave me here! I’m not worth it! Save yourselves!” However, they would not listen to any of my desperate pleading. They knew I had been the one taken because I was the strongest link, the one that they would always fight for, a label my brother proudly bestowed upon me previously in life.


During the dream, the new, strange, terrifying dream, my big brothers; Morgan, Antony and Shizuo, were using the best of their ability to save me and protect Jynx at the same time. I had been the bait for them to come, the bait of maybe only one, but nonetheless the bait that drew them all to this horrible situation. We were a team- we stood united or not at all, and to us the others lives mattered just as much, perhaps more, than our own. I despised witnessing them be harmed and it hurt me even more deeply that I could only sit and watch while they risked their lives, absolutely helpless and consumed by fear.


Back in the living world, I was tossing and turning as the dream progressed and worsened, my mind clouded darkly with the turbulent black cloud of the nightmare. There was a stranger- resembling a cat in ways- and he was the one trying to kill one of my brothers, which one I couldn’t tell. He had this gun, a foreign sort of object, obviously impeccably manufactured with one purpose in mind- to kill. And not to kill just anything. Loaded with silver bullets laced with holy water, it was designed to kill everything and anything- whether human, wolf, demon, dragon or vampire. A gun to kill the unkillable, to maim those previously thought invincible. People I loved were going to die. And there was nothing I could do to stop it.