The White Dragon's Breath

The White Dragon's Breath

 

 

A cave is set in the mountains (mounains)

Only a few have seen it (seen it)

A sparkle of white and blue (and blue)

Scales as white as diamonds (as diamonds)

Claws sharper than blades (than blades)

Its breath colder than ice (than ice)

It looks straight at you with death (with death)

 

Chorus:

The white dragon's breath is legendary

The white dragon's breath hasn't been seen by many

The white dragon's breath means death to all

The white dragon's breath is mine to fall

 

It kills for survival and respect (respect)

It's supposedly afraid of us (of us)

But it's really not that bad (that bad)

I've met it and even stroked it (stroked it)

I was going to end the terror (the terror)

But then in its eyes, I saw it (you saw it)

Its power struck my soul in the center (in the center)

 

Chorus:

The white dragon's breath is legendary

The white dragon's breath hasn't been seen by many

The white dragon's breath means death to all

The white dragon's breath is mine to fall

 

The white dragon lays dormant 'til now ('til now)

Who knows when it will awaken (awaken)

It may take a million years or more (or more)

But we're all safe. For now. (For now)

When it awakens. It will (It will)

Reak havoc until it's killed. (it's killed)

I doubt that will be the bill (the bill)

 

Chorus:

The white dragon's breath is legendary

The white dragon's breath hasn't been seen by many

The white dragon's breath means death to all

The white dragon's breath is mine to fall

 

It's awoken but not as normal. (What's different?)

A rider has went and tamed it. (has tamed it)

Now it's no longer a berden. (What is it?)

It's friendly and now a legend. (A legend)

The planet no longer fears it. (Yeah right!)

This legend is infact a story (How is it?)

The dragon is part of my spirit. (How come?)

 

Chorus:

The white dragon's breath is legendary

The white dragon's breath hasn't been seen by many

The white dragon's breath means death to all

The white dragon's breath is mine to fall

 

My fall....... (X8)

Author's Note

If there is anything that you think could be made better; grammar, spelling, ideas, etc. please feel free to leave your ideas and changes in comments please and I will take them into consideration and possible change it to what you suggest.

Reviews

[Brittany DeFranco]

I love it, I wanna read more poetry from you lol

[The dark story]

now this is something different..a very different theme i should say.i liked reading it..i don't know why.but i can't help myself imagining it as a song.a very grave song........and the chorus is pretty nice too........i liked the way you have described a dragon's features and behavior so elegantly and in such a nice detail......great work!!!!

[∠( ᐛ 」..]

This is really good ^_^
Great work!
100/100

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If it's supposed to be a song I love it!