Prologue

The story of how one ordinary human girl became immortal and more than a plain human.

Prologue

 

My name is Rose Bakura Yuki and I would have never thought that I would become what I have became. I'm part vampire, demon, wolf and human. I was so close to death, I never thought that I would live to see this day, but thanks to my big brother Morgan, I'm still alive.

 

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Everyday, my big brother, Morgan Inuyasha Yuki and I walked around Domino City with our little sister Jynx Ishtar Yuki and our friends; Blare Yuki-Kaiba, Tristan Kojii Taylor and Paradox Yuki-Kaiba.  Domino City had a lot of history; the Battle City tournament, a museum with a lot of Ancient Egypt artifacts and a boy, named Yugi Moto.

 

Yugi Moto was the original person to complete the Millennium Puzzle and gain the powers of an Egyptian Pharaoh - Atem. There was also a mystery to him, as the Pharaoh side of him - that would take over occasionally - had lost all of his memories about his past. The only thing he knew was that he had to get all seven Millennium items and the three Egyptian God cards - Obelisk, the Tormentor; Slifer, the Sky Dragon and the Winged Dragon of Ra - if he wanted to regain his memories and find out his name. That's right, he didn't know his name. His name was Atem.

 

You would have expected the original owners (not the Priests) of the seven Millennium items - Yugi Moto, Marik Ishtar, Ryou Bakura, Maximillion Pegasus, Ishizu Ishtar and Shaddi - to have had them still. You would be wrong. Only one of the original six owners’ still had his Millennium item - Yugi Moto. The owners of the Millennium items here are: my big brother, Morgan; my little sister, Jynx; my ex-boyfriend - friend - Blare; Blare's brother, Paradox; our friend, Tristan and of course, myself.

 

We were all different in our own ways. Blare was a dragon; Tristan was a griffin; Paradox was a thunder "god"; Jynx was half wolf; Morgan was part wolf, vampire, demon and human and I, myself, was just immortal.

 

Morgan was always looking after everyone; he was the "adult" of the group. He mostly looked after Jynx and myself as we were his little sisters and he didn't want anything bad to happen to either of us. Although, as the days pass, one of us will surely get hurt, or possibly even, almost die. Morgan was the owner of the Millennium Scales and they always came in handy if we ever needed help getting out of serious trouble - which was usually all of the time.

 

Jynx had the Millennium Rod and always, for a laugh, took control of Blare's mind - even though he had the Millennium Key - and would try to get Morgan and mine's Millennium items.

 

Paradox always cheated in a duel, as he would use the powers of his Millennium Eye to see what cards we had in our hands and figure out, from reading our minds, what card we would play.

 

Tristan had to put up with the Millennium Necklace and only be able to see the future and what was all going to happen to each of them - although, he would never tell me if anything bad was going to happen to either, Morgan, Jynx or myself, no matter how much I asked.

 

Lastly, I had the Millennium Ring and a dark side. That's right; a person like me has a dark side, all because of that one thing.

 

All of us would usually end up seeing the same people everyday. Morgan's, Jynx's and mine's older brothers; Shizuo and Anthony, our friends; Kazumai-chan, Gobi and Momo and for me, my boyfriend Toshiro - Shiro for short. We always have a great time with each other and most of the time, none of us get hurt... except maybe Jynx, Shizuo - who was the Ghost Rider - and occasionally, Paradox as well.

Author's Note

If there is anything that you think could be made better; grammar, spelling, ideas, etc. please feel free to leave your ideas and changes in comments please and I will take them into consideration and possible change it to what you suggest. This is not fully a Yu-Gi-Oh fanfiction, only parts of this are relating/based on Yu-Gi-Oh and I don't take any credit for those parts. Anything relating/based on any Manga/Anime, I don't take any credit regarding those things.

Reviews

[dw817]

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First thing I notice, you might simplify some of the names, not include the last names as I think that detracts from the story. If you need to say someone is a brother or sister, father, or daughter, go ahead and add those exact words in the text instead of last names.

In fact you might even simplify some of the first names as well for reader convenience. Go ahead and use the long to name to start out with, but then interject some conversation where one of the characters calls a person by their shorter name and after that point, the narrator uses that shorter name to refer to them from then on.

Maximillian, for instance after he is spoken to by one of the other characters by his shorter name of Max - is then referred to hereafter in the story as Max for simplicity sake.

Other than that it looks like a busy read and quite a story you've set ahead for yourself ! :)

[Rose]

Thanks a lot, and I will try think of how to change the names to make it easier for the reader.

[dw817]

Readers like a good story. I have to admit sometimes I go a little crazy with my names, such as one main character is an anesthesiologist who goes by the full name of Petrov Mayelkonyvich, or Petrov for short. :)

[Rose]

Ah I see, I'll try fix it and make the names shorter throughout.

[Indigo]

one word ... awesome

100/100

[Rose]

YAAAAAYYYYYY!!!!!! :D

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Can't wait to see what happens next. I don't know why. But your books and stories give me a spark of imagination. Keep writing! =)