My Love

This is a poem of how I feel that the one person I truly love is so far, and that I can only see him during the holidays. Sorry if some of the wording isn't good, I couldn't find good rhyming words.

Being stuck in my home

with nothing to fear,

but even though I'm alone,

I wish you were here.

To give me a hug,

when I need you the most.

To make me smile big,

when I hear you boast.

I love you,

with all my heart.

And it makes me upset,

to know we're apart.

I need a hug.

I need a smile.

I wish you were around,

to cuddle for a while.

You are my love,

my joy,

my happiness.

I'm glad to have you,

because if not,

I'm sure I'd be depressed.

Author's Note

Sorry if there are any errors, but for this one poem, I don't really care. I just wanted to write this for someone who I love with my heart.

If anyone has better rhyming words for "happiness" and "most" please let me know.

Reviews

[William]

Really liked the poem. Also cool to see I'm not the only one writing stuff like this xD

Sorry, for I do not know better rhyming words. But that's mostly because I tend to write in spanish, as I feel more comfortable using it. Anyway, looking forward for more of your work

[Rose]

Thank you very much, but I don't tend to write much poems. I prefer to write lots of stories. The only time I write a poem, is if I have any inspiration to write one, and if I can think of rhyming words to make it work.

[William]

Oh, well I think your inspiration works pretty well. I also write when I get the right idea, which tends to happen often but the topic usually stays the same ^^'

[Rose]

That's great, and thanks. I guess after all this time, I finally found the person who means the world to me.

[Peach]

I can sense the need of the girl throughout the poem. The atmosphere felt, light, when I read this. Thanks for the poem

[Rose]

You're welcome and thanks for reviewing.

[livetowrite]

Thank.you for sharing this beautiful poem x

[Rose]

Welcomes and thanks as well.

[Saddam]

I'm glad to have you,
because if not,
I'm sure I'd be depressed.
this a true love for whom you love most....very nice poem with lots of feelings....love it...

[Rose]

Thanks a lot and yeah, I love him with all my heart

[Kawaiikitty96]

Aww, this is so sweet, yet saddening due to the fact that the two of you are apart. I really hope it works out! What matters is that you seem madly in love, and that's what keeps the fire burning.

[Rose]

Thanks a lot ^///^ I know it's sad that we can't see each other as much as normal couples, but it doesn't bother either of us as long as we can see each other occasionally. :)

[GorgEOus NiGhtMarE]

Long distant relationships are the worst. :/ If you guys stay honest and loyal to eachother you'll be back together in no time. I didn't mind the parts that didn't rhyme. My fav part was:
'I need a hug.
I need a smile.
I wish you were around,
to cuddle for a while '
Thanks for the share :)

[Rose]

Welcomes, and yeah... long distant relationships are hard, but both of us care about each other too much to hurt the other. As long as I can see him occasionally, I'm happy, because I know we'll be together properly in a few years. :) I get to see him before Chirstmas, so that's my present sorted. xD

[Rose]

*Christmas

[GorgEOus NiGhtMarE]

Best kinda Christmas present you could get :p goodluck to you both :) he sounds like a lucky guy

[Rose]

He is, but I think I'm the lucky one.

[Latifa]

nice poem filled with emotions

[Rose]

Thanks very much

[Twilight_Starlight]

Sounds Lovely and it is okay that is doesn't rhyme at all

[Rose]

Thanks a lot sis

[Belle]

I love it so emotional!! Sorry but I have no rhyming words either.

[Rose]

Thanks a lot, and it's fine.

[Kato Uchiha]

Aww! That's nice! also I have no words rhyming :/ that's why i don't write a lot of poems lawl.

[Rose]

I can tell lol, and thanks a lot.