Cry, Just Cry

I'm getting so stressed about everything and it is close to making me want to just curl up into a corner and cry my eyes out.

I don't know what to do

Yet there is something I want too

I want to hide myself away

Hide myself from the light of day

Curl up into a corner of my own

And just cry my eyes out in my room alone.

I have had enough with all of this

And if I give up with it all

I would be utter bliss

I would have no stress,

No pressure, and be able to rest

I think that is just what I'll do

Give up on my work and get rid of all this

Although it'll probably upset you

But I feel it's what I have to do

I'm sorry if it's not what you would choose

But I feel like it is the only thing left I can do

I know you wouldn't like see me cry

But I feel like if I don't give up on this work

Then I will just

I will just have no choice

I'll curl up into a corner

A corner all alone

And cry

Just cry.

Author's Note

I guess I haven't been myself much lately, I haven't even been working on new stories or things like that. I guess it's because I miss someone and also, due to all the stress I am feeling at the moment and all to pressure that is being put on me with my school work. Any grammar mistakes let me know and also where a new stanza should be placed.

Reviews

[dw817]

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We can all miss others, Rose. As I tell people, I may not have forgotten you, but I have misplaced you, if you can let me know where you are, I will certainly return to you again.

And a woman's tears are a precious thing indeed. As Selan said from Final Fantasy Tactics, "That's right. You shouldn't cry easily. Save your tears. Do you understand?"

And you are not alone. All my life I felt I have never really fit in - not really. And I do have days where I feel miserable and cry. But there are other days when I'm hyper and bouncing off the walls and Rose is telling me to, "Kah-wit it already !" :D

So while you may be sad now, just know in the days to follow, you will - you MUST have happier times. It's the heart seeking to heal itself from past sadness - always, don't deny what your heart truly feels - and let your feelings flow.

If you need to cry now go ahead. But never EVER cry alone. Be with someone you love when you do ...

[Rose]

Thank you very much, you seem to know what to say to make me feel good about my writings, as well as make me smile. Thank you. :)

[dw817]

You're very welcome, stay strong !

[Jynx]

Ok this is just getting ridiculous now TT.TT I like never cry and that's twice in 5 mins and its your fault TT.TT on the upper hand... it's really good :) shows where you are coming from very clearly and you clearly show ALL OF LE EMOTIONNESS

[Rose]

Sorry :( I never meant to make you cry, I guess it was just because I had had enough of everything.

[Jynx]

It's ok :) it just shows how powerful your writing is :)

[Rose]

Yeah.

[Phoenix]

Agree with Atiba here that you have expressed your feelings AND EMOTIONS VERY WELL

[Rose]

Thank you.

[The dark story]

aw...this one is so sweet rose...really nice.it's true that some people become such a vital part of our life that we can't even concentrate on our own work.May i ask you one thing...why have you kept few words bold and few in italics..do you want to signify anything there...please tell me.I think the poem has expressed your feelings AND EMOTIONS VERY WELL...but let me tell you one thing you should hold loos of yourself because of others because the great writer has said "in life there are many separations and death"...anyway...pretty nice work...just keep it up!!

[Rose]

Thanks and those in italics and bold we just to be emphasised as important points within the poem

[The dark story]

oh..got it then...and no need for thanks

[Rose]

Oh alright. ^^