Losing You

Losing You

A Poem by Rose
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This is what I feel about one of my friends, even though I know now I'm not losing her.

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I am so confused
I just don't know what to do
First she's got a girlfriend,
Now she's got a boyfriend,
I just feel like I'm losing you
Losing you.
You know my feelings for you,
which the are so true
I just wish I knew
If it was true, that I'm losing you
I feel like I'm losing you.
I'm happy for you
That much is true
I just wish it didn't feel like I was
Losing you.

© 2013 Rose


Author's Note

Rose
This is just a random poem I wanted one of my friends to see, but she said it was so cute that I should post it. >///<

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Constructive notes:
Instead of 'gf' or 'bf' write it in full - it makes it much more meaningful.
And 'so losing you' makes almost no sense at all - try to reword it.

While I think I know what you're talking about, try to use punctuation - it helps when you write in actual English.

=)

Posted 11 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Rose

11 Years Ago

Not jealous of my friend... Although, I guess you could say that is kind of the reason, but not in t.. read more
Zombie Waffle

11 Years Ago

Well, what matters is what comes out through your poetry.
Rose

11 Years Ago

True.



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Really nice and emotional,I loved it!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rose

11 Years Ago

Thank you. Hehe
Very sad and emotional, can tell you have strong feelings here...hopefully you're not going to have to ever lose her though =)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rose

11 Years Ago

I hope I won't at least lose her as a friend, but I've lost my chance to be with her, that's what I .. read more
Perri

11 Years Ago

Aww..sadface ='(
Rose

11 Years Ago

Ya. *Sigh*

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Rose
Rose

Edinburgh, West Lothian, United Kingdom



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