Losing You

This is what I feel about one of my friends, even though I know now I'm not losing her.

I am so confused

I just don't know what to do

First she's got a girlfriend,

Now she's got a boyfriend,

I just feel like I'm losing you

Losing you.

You know my feelings for you,

which the are so true

I just wish I knew

If it was true, that I'm losing you

I feel like I'm losing you.

I'm happy for you

That much is true

I just wish it didn't feel like I was

Losing you.

Author's Note

This is just a random poem I wanted one of my friends to see, but she said it was so cute that I should post it. >///<

Reviews

[Zombie Waffle]

Constructive notes:
Instead of 'gf' or 'bf' write it in full - it makes it much more meaningful.
And 'so losing you' makes almost no sense at all - try to reword it.

While I think I know what you're talking about, try to use punctuation - it helps when you write in actual English.

=)

[Rose]

Thanks, I'll change those parts into full words, and I will try get the other part fitting in right. And if it is okay for me to ask, what do you think I'm trying to talk about here, because I don't want to try have people get the wrong idea of what the poem is supposed to mean.

[Zombie Waffle]

It sounds like you're jealous of your friend.
That's about as deep an understanding as I can gather from this.

[Rose]

Not jealous of my friend... Although, I guess you could say that is kind of the reason, but not in the way you think. I guess there is something more that I feel between the two of us... *sigh*

[Zombie Waffle]

Well, what matters is what comes out through your poetry.

[Rose]

True.

[dw817]

⊰ℛℛ⊱
Friends can be fickle and fleeting. Sometimes you never know who your true friends are until adversity hits you - and those who are still there to help you are the ones you can count on. Hang in there. :)

[Rose]

Thanks very much.

[dw817]

UBetcha !

[Rhianne Ney]

This is a sad one and I hope you might get over it.

[Rose]

I will try to, because seeing her happy means everything to me, and if being with who she is with makes her happy then I'll be happy for her.

[BlackHeartNeko]

I have wasted a minute of my life.

[Rose]

Alright then...

[Rhianne Ney]

Ohm, it's cute really so great job~!

[Rose]

Not cute! >///

[Rhianne Ney]

I think it was!

[Rose]

Thanks.

[Rhianne Ney]

Welcomezz

[Tavionna]

This past wek I almost lost my mind. Good write! =)

[Rose]

Thanks.

[T. Val]

This is sad and deep. The feeling of loving someone you care for is devastating and you feel helpless. This is a great piece.

[Rose]

Thanks.

[RapidReviewer]

I see you feel very passionless about this friend. I hope everything goes ok for all of you !

[Rose]

Thanks. I hope so too.

[Kato Uchiha]

i feel the same way about her but she'll never stop being our friend and that much we can both agree on !

[Rose]

I know, but there's more that this means then what you think.

[Fang]

This is a really good poem, emotional, I love poems like this. Good job

[Rose]

Thank you, my friend said it was cute... >//

[Fang]

it is it's more than cute it's awesome

[Rose]

Thanks.

[Fang]

np