Friends... No... Family

This shows that even my closest friends feel like family to me.

You are a friend to me,

No more than a friend.

You are everything,

Everything in which I can depend.

I can depend on you,

Depend on you like a family member.

Someone who cares for me in various ways

And someone who will always remember.

Always remember what they mean to me.

And what I feel for each of them.

And I hope they know,

Know that I will love them

Until the very end.

Author's Note

Please give your reviews and opinions on what you think of this poem. I'm not very good at writing poems, although I always try my best.

Reviews

[dw817]

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Now, Rose, you don't wanna hold onto someone too tight. It's like when I give Chris a bear hug when I see him and he squelps, "I gotta breeze, man !" He's a wonderful friend to me, but I can squeeze the air right outta him if I'm not careful in my affection.

Love is beautiful, love is wonderful - but you don't wanna smother it. :)

However, this is definitely a well-written poem, and I understand the emotions that run through camaraderie and deep friendships. I had one myself years ago until he moved. Hang in there.

[Rose]

Thank you very much for the sweet review

[dw817]

UBetcha, think of LOVE as a butterfly. Sure you can pin it all up like a collector, but it's much more interesting to watch it in flight, and that means a very and uniquely gentle touch. :7

[RapidReviewer]

Pretty touching. keep your friends close but your family closer than ever. ! nice poem !

[Rose]

Thank you.

[Jynx]

:D

[GorgEOus NiGhtMarE]

Your friends are so lucky ! This is so sweet ! :D

[Rose]

Thank you. :3

[Patrick Henry]

Very very nice!! Only the first stanza threw me off. lol First line: How cute! Second line: Ouch! ....no MORE than a friend? : ) Third line: Now I'm everything. ...cool. Back to normal.... then going into the second stanza, I "your friends" are now family to you, and everything, but no MORE than a friend. Overall, your poem touches upon the sweetest message ANY friend would receive with sincerity and as a whole. Well done!! xoxo -Mark

[Rose]

Thank you, I was basically trying to put out that my friends to me, feel more than friends, as they aren't my friends, they are my family.

[Katherine Enma Pineappl..]

Aww this is such a nice, heartwarming piece that makes me think that your friend must be incredibly lucky :)

[Rose]

Not just one friend, many. I wrote this to express how much my friends mean to me, and what I feel for having met them.

[Katherine Enma Pineapple]

It's a nice way of showing them :)

[Rose]

Yeah, that's what I was aiming for. Hehe.

[anxia]

Your friends must be very lucky to have you as their friend! Thats a sweet poem BTW

[Rose]

I don't know if they are lucky to have me as their friend, but I do know that I am lucky to have them. Thanks.

[Jynx]

pshhh if I have you as a friend who writes this about how you feel i'm part of your family then I feel very lucky indeed (:

[Rose]

Yay!

[Vertigoingnowhere]

wow, this is really good! i love this! great structure and everything, mind checking out my stuff? thanks :)

[Rose]

Thank you. I'll give your stuff a look when I have the time, heh. I'm so busy writing new stories and stuff, that I hardly take a break to read others. xD I should read some stories of others on here at some point.

[Forever Hidden]

GOD I almost had my jaw drop

Amazing. Fell in love with the poem!

[Rose]

I'm glad. I was aiming to allow the people who I care about to know how I truly feel about them.

[Soul Fire]

Wow so wonderful and beautiful. So glad you have great people to support you in your life. It's funny how sometimes people who aren't biologically your family,become your family! Very relatable! Good work!

[Rose]

Thank you so much, and I know right! :3 I've had some friends that I have known for about a year now, and even though they aren't actually family to me, I feel like they are.

[Soul Fire]

Family doesn't have to be by blood, it can be much deeper than that

[Rose]

That is exactly what I feel for them. Who cares if they aren't blood related, they are my family. :3

[Soul Fire]

Exactly!