My Caring Big Brother

Here's another poem that I have tried to write.

You are my light, my life, my heaven on earth.

If something happened to you, I would probably go beserk.

A little sister, without a brother to love her.

Is a sister who has nothing to live for.

My brother means everything to me.

My one and only.

The only brother for me.

He cares about me with all his heart,

We may not be related by DNA

But to him, and to me,

We are family.

I can't live without him

He's the one who cares for me so.

If something happened and he couldn't be around,

I would probably get up and just go.

Go over to where he lives,

Go over to see he's safe.

Because if I didn't have my brother,

My life would go to waste.

Author's Note

Let me know what you think please, and let me know if you think anything has/could be changed.

Reviews

[dw817]

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I have that. Chris says I am his Little Brother. We're about the same age with a big difference, I don't think things through in real life very well, very impulsive when I buy something, and get emotional and upset at easily times, much like a kid, whereas he is perfectly level-headed.

I've known him since I was 16 and I don't know how I would get along without him - so - yes, your poem definitely plucks a heart string there. Nicely written ... ღ

[Rose]

Thank you very much, I'm glad there are people out there like me who feel the same about their brothers.

[dw817]

Well, I don't have a brother in real life. I have Rose and Carlos and my sister and my doctor and Chris, and - well, that's about it really. So Chris is essentially my big brother. Carlos is my sorta Dad.

Rose is my sorta Mom, and my sister, I think she makes a good sister after all. :)

[Wingless Fallen Angel]

This is pretty close to how I feel about my oldest cousin. We act exactly alike. :3 Beautiful write.

[Rose]

Thank you

[Sasuke Uchiha]

Who were you thinking of when you wrote this sis?

[Rose]

You.

[Jynx]

Yeah (: I just hope one day i'll be able to meet him x

[Rose]

I know what you mean, I hope I'll be able to meet him someday as well.

[Jynx]

Yeah coz he is awesome (:

[Rose]

Oh yeah :) XD

[Sasuke Uchiha]

and i want to meet you both one day as well

[Jynx]

YAY~

[Jynx]

Wo ai ni onii~san

[Perri]

Awwww that's so sweet =']

[Rose]

Thanks :P

[Coyote Poetry]

A very good poem. Good to have love and concern for your brother. I like the kind emotion and the positive feel of the excellent poem.
Coyote

[Rose]

Well I don't actually have a big brother, but I talk to someone who feels like a big brother to me, and I feel like he is my big brother.

[Coyote Poetry]

Good to have someone to talk to. Nice to have someone to be a big brother.

[Rose]

I know.