My Family and My Existence

A poem I wrote a while ago, I'm not sure if it entirely makes sense.

I feel like my entire life is worthless

Like my very existence is meaningless.

I seem to make things better instead of worse,

Maybe is it because I've been cursed?

My friends and family are the reason for my existence,

And if it wasn't for them I would not be here now.

They are my life, my soul, my everything.

But there is one thing that they will never hear me do,

That is to hear me sing.

Author's Note

Let me know what you think please.

Reviews

[dw817]

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Gosh I think I just got through reading a poem that said the same thing. My entire life is worthless. Hmm ... I recommend a banana sandwich to cheer you up. :)

[Rose]

Thanks, that's sweet, although, I'm not fond of banana sandwiches. xD

[dw817]

It's just a metaphor to me, it means find your happy center, wherever that might be. For some people it's food, others it might be medication or meditation. Perhaps even some nice music or a walk in the park with friends, whatever it is that cheers you up. :7

[Rose]

My friends are the one thing that always makes me smile.

[dw817]

Then understand this. Your life is not worthless. Your friends want to spend time with you. You want to spend time with them. You are telling each other that you LIKE each other and that you look forward to seeing them and you hope to see them again.

That is by no means worthless. Chin up, if you spend all your time watching your feet you may trip over them. :)