The Beginning of the End

This is the story of the last three members of the Uchiha clan and their friends from other clans; eg. the Uzumaki clan.

Prologue - The Beginning of the End

Three of the last remaining members of a clan have the story of how their entire clan was destroyed and how they managed to look after each other - mostly the older brothers looking after the little sister - for about 10 years, maybe more.

Each of the three are different in each way. Itachi Uchiha, is the oldest of the three of the siblings. He has been looking after his younger siblings since they were born and even til this day, he continues to look after them. Sasuke Uchiha, is the middle child of the three siblings. He and his older brother sometimes never get along, although it shows how much they are able to work together when it comes to looking after, protecting and nearly raising on their own, their little sister. Lilly Uchiha, is the youngest of the three and is also the only girl of the siblings. She sometimes feels helpless and usually doesn't want her brothers help at all. She is surprisingly stubborn and wants to be able to do things and look after herself, although she knows her brothers won't let her, even though they know she is able to protect herself.

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In the beginning, there was a couple that were from a certain clan - the Uchiha clan- called Mikoto and Fugaku, and one day they were blessed with a child. This child would grow up to protect his younger siblings - although, at the time, nobody knew that. He was Itachi Uchiha. Itachi had been the only child of the family for about 5 years, until his younger brother, Sasuke, was born. As the Nine-Tailed beast attacked the village of Konoha, where the Uchiha's were living, Itachi was left protecting and looking after his baby brother. Itachi, even though he was busy studying at the academy for the first 2 years of Sasuke's life, would always find time to play with his little brother as his father was more interested in Itachi more than Sasuke.

As the brothers grew up, they really started to think that it would be the two of them - brothers forever. However, at the age of 11 - Itachi - and 6 - Sasuke - the brothers were told something they weren't expecting. They were going to have a younger sibling. Both were wishing for it to be another brother, but as the days passed, their wish for a brother was destroyed. Their little sister was born, and at first, neither brother seemed really happy when they were around her. Although, most of that was just show, as one day, the two brothers were out having fun that they hadn't had together in a while and both were incredibly happy and talking about how happy they were to have a little sister.

However, all the happiness between the family was coming to an abrupt end, as just 2 years after Lilly - the little sister - was born, something drastic happened and changed the families lives forever. Itachi was intent on destroying his clan, even though he was only 13. The strange thing is that after Itachi killed his parents, Sasuke was the one who found their parents dead and Itachi standing over them. Why had Itachi only killed their parents and not killed Sasuke and Lilly as well? Had Itachi been ordered by someone to destroy his clan? Was he determined to protect his younger siblings from whoever had ordered him to kill his clan? Only one person knows the answer to those questions.... Itachi Uchiha - the oldest sibling.

Author's Note

If there is anything that you think could be made better; grammar, spelling, ideas, etc. please feel free to leave your ideas and changes in comments please and I will take them into consideration and possible change it to what you suggest. This is kind of a Naruto fan fiction, so anything that relates to Naruto I don't take any credit for those things.

Reviews

[dw817]

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First off, I want to say this is very professionally done ! Nice margins, tabulation, font, the works.
While you mention Itachi and Sasuke, you then add the birth of the baby sister - yet the reader is left wondering initially where that came from.

Perhaps reverse some of the direction of the story so the birth is better understood and not just added into the story with, "their little sister was born." either that or change the wording since she is a stranger to the family, perhaps, "a little girl was born."

Your story seems kinna violent too - which is fine, but the story does not indicate what the motive for the violence is, especially from Itachi. The reader is definitely left in the dark. Suggest you build a bit of a back-story so the reader has a better idea of where this malice is from. An informed reader, especially for an opening chapter is definitely a happy one and one that can become intimate and fond of the characters involved - which is every writer's desire.

Hang in there ! :7

[Rose]

Thank you very much, you truly think it's been done professionally? I will change the wording for that part of the prologue, once I've finished the entire story. Sorry if the story is too violent, I didn't truly have an idea of how I was going to play this story further on, now that I do know what I planned on doing further on in the chapters, I will edit the prologue to give a better back-story and hinting at the malice. I will more than likely go back to edit the entire story and each chapter once I've finished the story itself, that way I know how the malice and violence came around. Thanks a lot for the review and help. :3

[dw817]

NP, you'll get there ! Just keep in mind your readers may well be between the ages of 15-95 and you want to somehow try and cater to all of their reading interests.

[Rose]

Thanks, you are helping very much.

[Shaka-Greywolf]

lol yea itachi's amazing not only did he whip out the entire clan at 13 but it was only due to his ambu status which might have been good to mention, one of my favorite naruto characters but i do want to see how you are going to add lily into the ninja world and how her and sasuke's relationship will flurish. one question thou will this follow the actual storyline of naruto or are you going to write out your own?

[Rose]

It's going to be between the story of Naruto itself at some parts, but mostly it is going to be my own story.

[RapidReviewer]

Another Naruto book ! boy have i seen many of these in my day ! But this one has a certain thing about that seems different. !
I like it !

[Rose]

Thank you. I have tried to put in some of my own characters so that it isn't fully Naruto related, but yet again, at the same time is.

[junaid altaf]

you really worked hard!

[Rose]

Thank you. I have a lot of free time, so I get a lot of time to work on it.

[junaid altaf]

your welcm,it is quite evident

[The XYZ Writer]

OMG. ANOTHER NARUTO LOVER. You are a girl ne?

Interesting how you gave Itachi and Sasuke a younger sister. This could really reverse many things.... Nice how you wrote the backstory of the clan too. I've been watching Naruto for six years now and had no idea that Itachi killed his clan at thirteen. Gosh, that's gruesome.

Anyways, this is really awesome! I look forward to reading the rest of the fanfic soon!

~XYZ

[Weeping Willow]

I like this story

[Rose]

I hope it would appeal to people like you.

[Katherine Enma Pineappl..]

I like the detailed description of the Uchiha clan. It's very appealing and I would love to see more of Lilly :D

Nicely written

[Rose]

Thank you very much. I feel like the Uchiha clan is one of my favourite from the Manga, even though there is only Sasuke and Itachi - mostly - left from the clan.

[The dark story]

wow.so glad to find another Naruto lover over here.....so you wrote about the Uchiha clan's history.....and in a very nice and descriptive way...you.just introduced someone of your own imagination which i find pretty good to be it's part...my only issue is that.i cannot think Itachi being sad for having a l;little sister.......i think he would be glad.anyway it is your thoughts .so it is nice and intriguing.keep writing like this

[Rose]

Thank you ^^ and yeah you are probably right that Itachi would be happy at having a little sister but I thought that it may get the readers attention more if I made it that neither him, nor Sasuke would be happy about having a little sister but later on it reveals how much they truly love having a little sister and how much they care about her and that they will do whatever they can to protect her

[The dark story]

that's exactly what i'm saying that i appreciate your idiosyncrasy ...i am sadly very busy with my studies otherwise i would have read it next chapters very soon.but i'll surely make it a point to read them ......

[Rose]

That is quiet alright. *smiles* Don't force yourself to read them if you have many studies to attend to. Writing these just gives me something to do during my free time, which I have quiet a lot of this year.

[Jynx]

btw you made a mistake in the last paragraph there you might want to check it out

[Rose]

That better now?

[Jynx]

i think so XD cant bloody remember now

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It's a great story it has lots of mystery and adventure and I hope you keep it like that
You should put how Sasuke felt when she saw her parents dead. Exept for that I think it's a great plot and story. Don't give up! =)

[Rose]

Thank you although I would like to point out that Sasuke is a guy not a girl ^^ but other than that thank you for the review. I hope you enjoy the rest of the story.

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Sorry it's cause Sasuke sounded like a girls name but tnx for reminding me and you're welcome

[Rose]

No problem, everyone makes simple mistakes occasionally :)