crying

i dont know why im crying

its not going to change anything

your love for me is fleeting

i do every thing to keep you by my side

but every other hour by you i am denied

i dont get it am i that bad of a person

am i too stupid to learn your lesson

i hate every thing about myself

i feel as if I was stuck living in hell

you have a way to let me out but you dont want to help

you look down and luagh at my torture

then you through stones at me and call me a horror

i hate you fat s**t you yell then shut the door

Reviews

[MelyG.]

omg this is crazy beautiful in its own way...i loved it.

[R. L. Ambar]

Very strong words used in the last line...

I am sure you have emotion behind this...

So sad it is

Good work

Rocher.

[Rockebah]

I read this poem and i feel the emotion pouring through my veins. Everyone feels like that time to time especially when they're in a relation but none expresses it quite like you. Your writing is blunt, straight forward and precise. I love how it just says exactly what is in your mind. No idling. Good job.