your life

sliced wrist

stumbling

drugged

collapsing

yelling

screaming

loving

hanging

unconcious

hospital

overdose

crying

pain

weekness

poverty

lying

trying

screaming

crying

silence

blue face

overdosing

dying

 

Reviews

[Dawn]

Nice piece hun, am wondering who black seal is though, and you messaged me three times, have you mistaken me for someone else.

Dawn

[Crimson1]

When the word hospital fit into the puzzle here my mind flooded with images from bad memories. I like the machine gun rhythm that crescendos at the end:
"lying

trying

screaming

crying

silence

blue face

overdosing

dying"

this would make a very very good spoken word piece, nice work.