"Dreaming is Believing"

Dare to make your dreams, more alive than when you're awake.

At the beginning of it all, I didn't realize how far you were 

from me. a  fantasized destiny.

As time went on, I realized my heart 

grew fonder, but you

are still so far from me. We have a long way to go

Suddenly I realized you are my every daydream. 

You're the reason 

for my every sweet dream.

Your eyes shine a light in my heart and it's like 

seeing the very first sun rise.

I can almost heart the wedding bells as I hear your melody. This was

 the start of it all. Not your

traditional Cinderella moment, but it's all the same to me.

You became to come closer to the stage.

Until you sat right next to me. 

the music from words, flowed from my heart.

Suddenly... Finally your hear with me.

As I pour out all I've got, you watch.

As I steadily wake up from

my dream, I reminisce when this was just once a blue 

moon. Realizing, I've never imagined 

you so close. 

Maybe one day, I will have another beautiful dream. A

place where you've always been... 

only when I wake, you'd be right there 

next to me.

 

Author's Note

This is something I wrote last night, it's traditional to what I usually do but I have no one word or specific motive following along. I know I usually put pictures but I wanted you all to imagine the love from the words and really feel it. Also, I wanted it to be more like a story as you read it but still have that lyrical quality (I personally) love about writing. This is a story of a girl who had always known that there was someone there but never knew who. She then began to realize that her heart was taken before she even really knew what love was. She had a lot to learn and as time went on, she realized she thought of him more and more. It wasn't just another crush. She would have the most vivid day dreams and even when she slept, she didn't have to think of him for him to be a part of it. He was so a part of her heart and mind that it was natural. It was then, everything became reality for her. Knowing the best things come to those who wait and everything would fall in place. I really hope you enjoyed this!! Thank you for reading xo

Reviews

[Glen Yumang Manese]

Beginning of it all, I didn't realize how far you were from me.
Just father then a distant memory, a fantasized
destiny.
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I didn't realize how far you were from me.
Just farther than a distant memory, a fantasized
destiny.
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I believe you could do without the beginning line...needs a bit of clarity with the rest...but I got your intentions right...I'd have at this one more time to give the verse a polish...but other than that...what I am accustom to reading of yours...the Author's note is just as long as your presentation...

[Rosaria_V]

Thank you very much!! I revised it some and hope it's a little better! Thank you for your help!

[Kleio13]

It is traditional, but i can tell in your heart that you are a humble individual. It's hard to find very humble poets who only have a vision for love and peace. Great work Rosaria

[Rosaria_V]

Awwww thank you soo very much

[MsJewel]

This is lovely Rosaria. There is a dream like quality to your words that drew me in as a reader. So lovely.

:) Julie

[Rosaria_V]

Thank you sweet Julie, I revised it some if you want a second look! :)

[Cody Williams]

A very good piece Rosaria! Thanks for sharing it!

-CW

[Rosaria_V]

Thank you CW I revised it some if you want a second look :)

[Coyote Poetry]

I like the complete poem.
"As I steadily wake up from
my dream, I reminisce when this was just once a blue
moon. Realizing, I've never imagined
you so close. "
I like those dreams of blue moons. We need these dreams. If we are lucky. We will touch a few blue moons in a lifetime. Thank you for the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Rosaria_V]

Thank you!! I revised it some!! if you want to take a second look at it. When I said I said, " I reminisce when this was just once a blue
moon. Realizing, I've never imagined
you so close. " I meant that the girl in my poem remembers when the feelings the she had only would come once in a blue moon. I tried incorporating that quote cause it was most fitting that way. Thank you for your kind words!!

[annabellee]

I really did enjoy this and it is a lovely story. well done :)

[Rosaria_V]

Thank you!! I revised it a bit if you want to take a second look at it. Thanks again for your kind words!!

[annabellee]

you're most welcome :)