Waves

Always drift in the direction of your dreams

Like a current you slowly consume me but then eventually the feeling leaves me, as I watch you slowly drift away. Its then I pray that you come back to me.  That you might stay. Each moment that passes leaves me a little more hopeful, a little more faithful. I’m drowning by your love.

Feels like I’m waking up on the shoreline revived and feeling alive. Who would have ever thought that even after the storm inside my head, you would still be here being the one to save me.

You were saved by a miracle, but I insist there was an angel that there was an angel that saved my life instead. Trying to convince me that it could not be because I was not awake to see, if they were only me then maybe they’d finally see.

Like the coming current touching the last bit of dry sand on the beach, that’s like you finally reaching me. And when the moments come when I feel you were meant for me, and then it slowly turns from me, I always pray for you to come back to me. 

Feels like I’m waking up on the shoreline, revived and I feel alive. Who would have thought the angel from my dream would be the one to save me, and bring me back to shore. Somehow, I’ve always known you would get me threw the storm.

Promise me, you won’t give up, that you won’t let go. Because you keep coming back to me, like the wave that always touches shore. You’re the wave inside that stayed even after the hurricane. Dreaming as I see the most beautiful sun sets on the beach, thinking of forever and always.

Promise me you’ll always be there to save me, even when the world calls us crazy. I know you will always be here. I promise you, I will always keep you close to my heart. Keep you afloat when the waters become ruff.  I don’t have a doubt that eventually reach the last dry patch of dry sand, because you know that’s where I’ll be.

 

 

Author's Note

Hey guys!! I am so sorry that I haven't been on in a while. School has been so hectic. I'm reaching the end of my semester and am taking some time to post a poem :) This poem is like most of my previous poems. I love being able to use objects, things, even places to help describe how sentimental something or someone is to you. I was not expecting to use the ocean to write a poem, but it ended up being a very good inspiration to how I was feeling. I have so many friends that are getting married and this is a new journey in their lives I hope to one day be able to be a part of. I hope you enjoy my poem and I will definitely try and catch up on my Read Requests :) Thank you all for your sweet comments and I only hope to get more feed back. If there is anything I should change (cause nothing I do, or write is perfect) please let me know. I tend to be cheesy at times but, I kinda like being cheesy haha :) Thanks again all. Have a beautiful day

Reviews

[MsJewel]

This is lovely Rosie. The ocean is often an inspiration for me as well...something about the ebb and flow of the tide, the seabirds singing on the breeze...

You share a piece of your heart in everything you write and it is a beautiful heart. You have touched mine with the beauty of your words.

:) Julie

[Rosaria_V]

Thank you so much for your kind words and endless support xoxoxo this means so much more then you could even imagine :)

[Anand Sehgal]

Feels like I’m waking up on the shoreline, revived and I feel alive

Lovely line :)

[icelandicblue]

I agree that the ocean is inspirational and you use it well as your poem encompasses those things you wish for and the desire to have someone there to always catch you.

[Rosaria_V]

I couldn't agree more, thank you!

[Coyote Poetry]

I like the photos and your thoughts. Good to write down thoughts and hope. Allow us to reaffirm our dreams and hope. Thank you for sharing your thoughts and photos.
Coyote

[Rosaria_V]

thank you very much. I also could not agree more.

[Robbie~xoxo~]

I know the feeling...
This is absolutely beautiful!... I felt like I was reading your heart's journal...
I enjoyed the pics...~xoxo~:)

[Rosaria_V]

Awww thank you so much!!!!!

[Cody Williams]

A really good write! Beautiful pics too! Thanks for sharing!

-CW

[Rosaria_V]

Thank you!!! I actually took those pictures. I hope your doing well.

[Cody Williams]

No problem at all!