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A Poem by Rosaria_V
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"There's something 'bout love that breaks your heart Whoa oh oh oh, it sets you free There's something 'bout love that tears you up Whoa oh oh oh, you still believe" -D.A.

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Each day, when the sun rises no words can compare. Each night, a message shines in starts as the moon helps guide their way. Forever dreaming of this moment. Never thought it would be real for me. The more time goes on, this feeling grows strong. My heart writes a song with out even trying. You are the inspiration that create the words within my soul. You're the reason that my story was for, dreaming of a chance. Forever enchanted everyday and ever after. 

© 2013 Rosaria_V


Author's Note

Rosaria_V
Here is a romantic little peace I hope you all enjoy!! Love is the most precious gift anyone can be bestowed. I have the blessing of loving my family, friends, faith, and passions in life. I try and take none for granted. I pray one day that I will find "my kind of perfect" and to be known he does not have to be "perfect." He just has to be perfect to me. Love and be love and know that you should never just fall with fear but just trust with faith. One day (if you already haven't) you will trust and just let go without even realizing it and it won't even feel like falling but flying. Thank you guys so much for reading and I hope you all know how much I appreciate you xoxo

"Never look back. If Cinderella went back to get her shoe, she would have never been a princess" -Unknown

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I think the "running" nature of this poem amplifies the wistful feeling of love. many would criticize and say it needs punctuation and separation. I don't think so. I think this poem works because of the running thoughts it provides. It was very well done and I wanted to point out its strength. I also love the elation that you bring to it. Great job!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rosaria_V

11 Years Ago

Thank you!! I tend to write the same way I talk and so sometimes it translates and sometimes it does.. read more
Eddie Phillips

11 Years Ago

You did a fine job..I loved it



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Beautiful .. !

"Your the reason that my story was for, dreaming of a chance. Forever enchanted everyday and ever after" .

Amazing !


Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rosaria_V

11 Years Ago

Thank you soooo much!! :D
I think the "running" nature of this poem amplifies the wistful feeling of love. many would criticize and say it needs punctuation and separation. I don't think so. I think this poem works because of the running thoughts it provides. It was very well done and I wanted to point out its strength. I also love the elation that you bring to it. Great job!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rosaria_V

11 Years Ago

Thank you!! I tend to write the same way I talk and so sometimes it translates and sometimes it does.. read more
Eddie Phillips

11 Years Ago

You did a fine job..I loved it
This is really lovely and very heartfelt. I love the quote you've included as well.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rosaria_V

11 Years Ago

Thanks you so much! Xoxo

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My name is Rosaria, Rosie for short :) I love to help people and want to be a teacher for children with special needs. This has been a passion of mine forever. ♫♥ Good things comes to th.. more..

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