quote/poem

"There's something 'bout love that breaks your heart Whoa oh oh oh, it sets you free There's something 'bout love that tears you up Whoa oh oh oh, you still believe" -D.A.

Each day, when the sun rises no words can compare. Each night, a message shines in starts as the moon helps guide their way. Forever dreaming of this moment. Never thought it would be real for me. The more time goes on, this feeling grows strong. My heart writes a song with out even trying. You are the inspiration that create the words within my soul. You're the reason that my story was for, dreaming of a chance. Forever enchanted everyday and ever after. 

Author's Note

Here is a romantic little peace I hope you all enjoy!! Love is the most precious gift anyone can be bestowed. I have the blessing of loving my family, friends, faith, and passions in life. I try and take none for granted. I pray one day that I will find "my kind of perfect" and to be known he does not have to be "perfect." He just has to be perfect to me. Love and be love and know that you should never just fall with fear but just trust with faith. One day (if you already haven't) you will trust and just let go without even realizing it and it won't even feel like falling but flying. Thank you guys so much for reading and I hope you all know how much I appreciate you xoxo

"Never look back. If Cinderella went back to get her shoe, she would have never been a princess" -Unknown

Reviews

[Eddie Phillips]

I think the "running" nature of this poem amplifies the wistful feeling of love. many would criticize and say it needs punctuation and separation. I don't think so. I think this poem works because of the running thoughts it provides. It was very well done and I wanted to point out its strength. I also love the elation that you bring to it. Great job!

[Rosaria_V]

Thank you!! I tend to write the same way I talk and so sometimes it translates and sometimes it doesn't haha but I am happy you like it!! I wanted to write it the same way someone would feel. Your mind and heart tend to go faster then we can really understand sometimes lol But thank you thank you!!! :D

[Eddie Phillips]

You did a fine job..I loved it

[SquinklaPsyOps]

Magnificently crafted and brilliantly rendered with significant figurative language.

[Rosaria_V]

Your so sweet omg!a :) thank u

[Coyote Poetry]

A very positive quote. We need people to enchant us and make us dream. Thank you for the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Rosaria_V]

Thank you sooo much!!

[Dye]

I really enjoy your quotes, they are short and sweet but still manage to capture a feeling. Very nice

[Rosaria_V]

Aww thank you so much!! :))

[RainDancer1997]

I wish to have that some day:)! Great job!!

[Rosaria_V]

You will love xoxo thank you

[Nix]

Very well written prose. It conveys a very strong feeling of love. Well done.

[Rosaria_V]

Thank you so much and yess! :)

[Kleio13]

love this. inspiring write

[Rosaria_V]

Thank you! :D

[dillonjensen]

I really like how you break the traditional structure of most poems, and this way you make what you're saying all your own. Not only that, the message within the lines is what caught my real attention. It's so comical to me how people act like we are so different, or that we have no idea what it's like to be in their shoes, when in reality we all share the beauty that is love with someone of our choosing.

[Rosaria_V]

Aww wow thanks so much and so true! :)

[dillonjensen]

You are very welcome! Nicely done.

[Traci]

Such a lovely write with an author's note that truly portrays the sweet gentle soul you are.

"I pray one day that I will find "my kind of perfect" and to be known he does not have to be "perfect." He just has to be perfect to me." Perfect lines and such a lovely way to view another, and love.

"never just fall with fear but just trust with faith." LOVE this, so very true.

I agree with Eddie, the running nature of this poem amplifies your thoughts perfectly. Free flow, honest thoughts and emotions that many will connect with.

[Rosaria_V]

[Rosaria_V]

You are so sweet!

[Robbie~xoxo~]

I truly enjoyed this romantic piece Rosaria! :)

There is a song in everyone's heart... you just have to find the right lyrics, and more importantly, the purpose which drives you to sing it.

Lovely write!

[Rosaria_V]

Thank you so much and so do I !! :)

[Robbie~xoxo~]

So happy for you! :)

[Antoñyo]

"my kind of perfect" ...not perfect, perfect for me! Yes, and yes it's a gift...a rare one, and you have a gift for writing of such...

"You are the reason that my story was for..." great line

Nice, very nice and enchanting piece.

[Rosaria_V]

Haha yes :) thank you!!! :D