Silly Girl

About love and how your afraid to fall but it doesn't even feel like your falling.

My head says, silly girl when are you ever gunna learn, and my heart beats with the words, just give this a chance. Taking just one more breath… never knowing what to expect. As time passes on this feeling grows more and more intense. I feel it in my heart and within my soul that something is meant to be. To have you stand in front of me, it would feel like a dream.

Every time I have to think my head gets in the way. But every time I see your face I know this is meant to be. The words echoing around me to give this up and let this dream fly away like a million doves to a blue lit sky. My feelings get in the way and I scream out inside,

Silly girl with your heart so blinded by a heart so far from you, but he feels so close; Silly girl when he looked into your eyes you already knew that he was meant for you. I feel the beating of my heart like a thunderstorm as the time comes closer to the moment that we meet again.

Day after day, night after night I can’t help but ask myself why I feel the way I do. Oh silly girl, don’t you know. I have my head rapped in the clouds in total bliss and at the very same time with uncertainty. I just have to believe….

            Silly girl with your heart so blinded by a heart so far from you, but he feels so close; Silly girl when he looked into your eyes you already knew that he was meant for you. Silly girl when are you ever gunna learn? As time passes by this feeling grows more and more intense.

            I hear the world telling me no when I feel god telling me yes. I want to hold on to this dream like no other. I can almost imagine your hand in mind and you loving me too. I can also see the look in your eyes and knowing our love is true.

Till then, I will quiet the voices. I will believe in faith and that good things come to those who wait. I can’t forward the hands of time but I know this will be worth the wait. And when the time finally comes I will not be afraid. Eventually they will see this silly girl believed in her dream. No matter how crazy as it may have seemed, this silly girl always chose to believe.

 

Author's Note

This is one of my most recent poems I have written, I love to write about love, faith, and dreams if you couldn't already tell haha :) I hope you enjoy!!

Reviews

[Glen Yumang Manese]

And when they time finally comes I will not be afraid. Eventually they will see this silly girl believed in her dream. No matter how crazy as it may have seemed, this silly girl always chose to believe.
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And when the time finally comes I will not be afraid. Eventually they will see this silly girl believed in her dream. No matter how crazy as it may have seemed, this silly girl always chose to believe.

let's get the fun stuff out of the way...first...and now:

seems like your other works...there is a positive feel in what you believe...and this just puts an exclamation point to that belief...I liked how you keep us remembering this was just a story of silly girl and her hopes are high...

[Rosaria_V]

Yes, more or less I was talking about a girl who falls in love but keeps getting hurt and now it's hard for her to believe but then she finds "love" and now she feels like she is back at the starting line again. Even after everything she still believes that she ca still find love, even if she is a "silly girl" for falling and being blinded at times. I love showing you should always believe in love and faith no matter what! :) Thank you for your review as always.

[Glen Yumang Manese]

you're welcome...thanks for a more brief detailed account of your work...

[Lee Foreman]

Very Inspiring Piece...The power of believing the unseen will eventually make the unseen seen

[Rosaria_V]

Aww thank u thank u! :) yes I love being able to write positive things about being able to believe in the impossible cause u can't have impossible without possible :)

[Brittney]

I really like how the girl portrayed in this keeps realizing her mistakes "silly girl" and the end reveals although she's been silly in her actions she will continue to believe and eventually overcome Her fears to gain her love. Very nice. And it ended perfectly

[Rosaria_V]

You are amazing! Thank you very much Brittney!! :)