Summer Breeze
A Poem by
Darkest Rose
Summer breeze,
Upon the sea,
Where seagulls swoop,
And hunt.
The children play,
While the parents sleep,
And dream of lady luck.
The summer breeze,
Upon the sea,
Where seagulls,
Swoop and hunt.
© 2011 Darkest Rose
Reviews
You are waxing lyrical in these poems of late! Beautiful!
Posted 12 Years Ago
Makes me want to go to the beach! Nice write! :)
Posted 12 Years Ago
Makes me want to go to the beach! Nice write! :)
Nice scene for a relaxing area, such as a beach... lovely picture. Your writes can be so simple and yet catch so much.
Posted 12 Years Ago
Nice scene for a relaxing area, such as a beach... lovely picture. Your writes can be so simple and yet catch so much.
Agree with stars are far...I felt same imagery...very nice :)
Posted 12 Years Ago
Agree with stars are far...I felt same imagery...very nice :)
Oh.. this was so nice ..
made me feel like im on the beach at night just dreaming ...so relaxing :)
Posted 12 Years Ago
Oh.. this was so nice ..
made me feel like im on the beach at night just dreaming ...so relaxing :)
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Added on October 19, 2011
Last Updated on October 19, 2011
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Darkest Rose Ireland
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Hi...Well I love writing,mainly poetry and sometimes short story's,I love walking in the woods during the summer and the spring it sometimes gives me idea's for writing.I mainly base my poetry on thin..
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