Summer Breeze

Summer breeze,

Upon the sea,

Where seagulls swoop,

And hunt.

The children play,

While the parents sleep,

And dream of lady luck.

The summer breeze,

Upon the sea,

Where seagulls,

Swoop and hunt.

Reviews

[Jeremy Baker]

You are waxing lyrical in these poems of late! Beautiful!

[TheConjuringCat]

Makes me want to go to the beach! Nice write! :)

[Victoria PoetryBunny]

Nice scene for a relaxing area, such as a beach... lovely picture. Your writes can be so simple and yet catch so much.

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

Agree with stars are far...I felt same imagery...very nice :)

[stars are far]

Oh.. this was so nice ..
made me feel like im on the beach at night just dreaming ...so relaxing :)