Sweet Birds Sing

Sweet birds sing,

O lalala,

As we walk along the sea.

Hands joined,

And smiles so sweet,

The birds just have to sing,

O lalala.

The water laps,

Onto the beach,

Where peaceful sands lay.

We walk along,

With a peaceful gate,

While the sweet birds sing,

O lalala. 

Reviews

[Jeremy Baker]

Light but resonant at the same time. Perfect

[Daniel88Batson]

My girlfriend said its cute.
However, you keep using this same structure in each of your poems. You have the ability to do more... do it! =D

[Victoria PoetryBunny]

Love this... such sweetness and imagined peace. Great write. Cute too.

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

A very clean and refreshing sense you convey...beautiful !!!