Fear

Oh I can't take it,

This fear,

I'm shaking.

The tears that stain my cheeks,

I just can't take it.

I gotta work this out,

This fear that's clinging,

I just can't get it out,

I'm just shaking.

Oh god get me out,

This fear is running me down.

Oh god can you get me out? 

Reviews

[Herl Rodrin]

Reading this poem makes me want to run as fast as I can.. Love the intensity of every lines.. Good job!

[Victoria PoetryBunny]

Fear wrapped around the finger in this write, nice.

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

A powerful intense piece....really hits the reader with powerful emotions when read..I love your style, exceptional :)