World

How can you smile so brightly,

When another souls been lost?

How can you be so carefree,

When another deaths joined the lot?

The deaths build up,

The people fall down,

The souls float by,

The living smile.

The worlds upside down,

The living are smiling,

While the dead cry,

Deaths are happening,

The alive laugh free.

What's this world come to?

Just full of upset and emotional disease. 

Author's Note

What I mean by 'emotional disease.' is that people are laughing, and having fun while they should be crying, and be upset sometimes, but they aren't. Tell me what ya think! :)

Reviews

[Victoria PoetryBunny]

So thoughtful... i think of this so many times. Something i do not quite understand. Really good write.

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Yes, profound write, but nicely done.

[TheConjuringCat]

SoulCrusader is right, it's so profound! It flows very well, too. Great read!

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

Very profound thoughts and feelings portrayed here, awesome work :)