How Did We End Here?

How did we end here?

Trapped in the dark,

Locked without the key.

Darkness floods,

Fear tickles,

Running,

Running along the hall,

Blood dripping,

Dementing,

Tormenting.

Times ticking,

Tick,

Tick,

Tick.

Five minutes to death,

Five minutes to run,

Five minutes,

1

   2

      3

         4...

               5...

                          DEAD!

Author's Note

Just give me your brutal honesty on this! Thanks :)

Reviews

[Victoria PoetryBunny]

I love this... it's different, and the structure is nice at the end with the counting. It's one of those reads where it leaves the reader just wanting to read it line from line not wanting to stop until the ending. Really good. :)

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

Sheer, imagery leaves the reader almost imploded within the result, well flowed and recititive, well done