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A Poem by Darkest Rose

You built me up,
Tore me down,
Cussed me out, 
Crushed my world. 

You made me your queen,
Treated me like royalty,
Said I was your world,
Then you sold me out.

Made my life hell,
Said I was a b***h,
Told your friends I'm false,
Then did it again.

Never again,
Will I trust you. 

© 2011 Darkest Rose


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Like ur 'fake' this too has deep REAL emotions...... we can all relate to this...... nd the gr8 thing bout it is dat all ur emotions hav been expressed clearly thru simplicity, simple plain words.....

Posted 13 Years Ago


Oh so powerful, and so much trust put to hurt with that pain and feelings that really show in this poem. I have been through similarity of this so much, and i know it is not a great feeling. *hugz*

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Darkest Rose
Darkest Rose

Ireland



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Hi...Well I love writing,mainly poetry and sometimes short story's,I love walking in the woods during the summer and the spring it sometimes gives me idea's for writing.I mainly base my poetry on thin.. more..

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