No Hope

All hope abandoned,

He who enter here,

Where the darkness circles,

And claims the place.

The darkness lives within,

No hope of leaving,

Trapped within this cave,

No hope within. 

My first sin,

Was what got me here,

Trapped within,

With no hope.

All hope abandoned,

He who enter here,

Where the darkness circles,

And claims this place. 

Author's Note

This is like my other pieces of writing I know but dark type poetry and love poetry is kind of my comfort zone so sorry! This poems kinda about being trapped within yourself over sins you've committed. When I refer to the 'cave' I actually mean conscious. Please tell me your views on this and be brutally honest!

Reviews

[Victoria PoetryBunny]

Brutally honest? Hmm don't be sorry. :) If it is your comfort zone, then it is your comfort zone, that's fine, and your good at it. I like how you wrote this poem, and what you said in your authors note about the cave and conscious... really interesting and neat how you did that.

[Becky C Strukamp]

It makes great sense. You penned it well.