I'm Gone, Just Like You

You ask for me,

Call out my name,

But I'm gone,

Just like you were gone.

                                                            I needed you,

                                                                You walked away.

                                                       Your lost,

                                                      I'm found

                               You call,

                                  You shout,

                                    You cry out.

                                    You left me,

                                         So I'm leaving you.

You left,

So I'm leaving.

Your in pain,

Well I was to.

I got out myself,

So you work your own way out.

You were gone.

So I am to.

Author's Note

Spelling errors please point them out! I really wanna know what you think of this piece. I know it's like my other writing but well...I saw the picture I added above the poem and just thought that up. Thanks :)

Reviews

[Victoria PoetryBunny]

I can see this in the picture you found... really nice how you wrote this and in the structure, and nice colors as well, i like it. It has feeling in it.

[Marie Harrison]

I like the structure and the tone of this poem. The varied colors are nice too!
Creative!