I'm Done!

My head full of secrets,

Full of lies,

Full of hate.

You lie,

I lie,

You strike out,

I scream and shout.

AND I'M DONE!

We fight,

We kiss,

You run,

I hide.

We play back and forth,

A game of chase.

I'm sick,

I'm tired,

AND I'M DONE!

We're over,

We're done,

We had fun,

But it's lost,

Games been played and won.

AND I'M DONE!

We fought,

We made up,

We kissed,

We broke up.

I won,

You lost,

You won,

I lost. 

AND I'M DONE! 

Author's Note

Point out any grammar issues and places I can change please! Thanks :)

Reviews

[Victoria PoetryBunny]

sad but strong, it made a impact with a nice point... really nice write, i love how you did the capital words, underline and in bold. good write :)

[Marie Harrison]

I feel the rage and the angst in this poem.
The desperation and the frustration that
relationships bring. Even healthy relationships
have these. Wonderful! Your poem made
me smile. I saw myself in it. Ha!

[Callista-Jade]

"A came of chase."
Correction:
"A game of chase."

Great poem! It really sheds light on relationship problems. It is very well written! I love the way you switched back and forth,
"I lost, you won."
"You won, I lost."
It really shows how hard relationships can be.