Wilting Love

Love once so strong,

So sweet,

So amazing,

Wilts away.

No more shall it be,

Let it rest,

Let it be,

For love is not an everlasting thing.

Author's Note

Okay this is a short poem I know that but I wrote this a while ago so I felt the need to post it because it is one of my fav pieces of mine.
Any spelling errors please lemme know :)

Reviews

[TheConjuringCat]

It flows so well it's insane. Great job! And I don't think a better picture oculd have been picked for this poem.

[Rose of Gondor]

Simple, touching words. The flow was beautiful. The last lines were absolutely true.

(P. S. Your pen name and mine are so close!!!)

[Tasha]

Short and to the point. It was a wonderful write.
♥ Ta'Shandra

[Jupiter Jazz]

Last 3 lines echo within me. Very true and classic

[sarah]

Love is a lasting thing it can be a lasting thing anyway this is a really wonderful write!

[Becky C Strukamp]

Short and to the point, but very powerful. An absolutely beautiful Poem.

[Victoria PoetryBunny]

Sad short write for love... but a nice short write it is. Really nice. I like how it's so simple but tells a lot actually, with love. I like this.

[Tania's Novels]

Well this is very well written! It's short,but I love the way you use these lines below.
"Let it rest,
Let it be,
For love is not an everlasting thing."
Beautiful!Great writing! :D

[Marie Harrison]

The flow is wonderful
Simple but sweet.

[Hotwater]

The poems good, but love can be everlasting... I know this.
*bird*