Love And Hate

Circling,

Dancing,

Moving round and round,

 Like you are torn between love and hate.

 Round and round we travel,

Moving with the passion of hate,

Then the passion of love.

 Torn between the two lines.

 Forever in between.

Author's Note

Any changes to be made or spelling mistakes please let me know. :)

Reviews

[Taylor Williams]

i like this honestly, its short but i like how you relate love to people and love constantly dancing back and forth between loving and hating eachother

[Jupiter Jazz]

Very epic and classic write right here

[Victoria PoetryBunny]

Nice capturing of love and hate within these lines of this poem, it speaks so much... with a impact and yet leaves room for thought thinking for the love and hate. Nice work, i like this.

[Marie Harrison]

Definately have experienced the passion of love and hate before.
Scary at tmes to experience the passion of hate.
It leaves you bewildered as to what happened.
I believe thise passions can be found in
other relationships too, not always
romantic relationship. Sibling rivalry would be
one example.

I enjoyed the imagery and the energy of
your poem.