Forever Dead

Forever dead

Deep in your heart

To ruin the soul

Just for the fun

Of that horned demon

Transforming,

Manipulating,

Ruining your love

The hate controls

The darkness works

Just to ruin what you hold dear 

To make the soul bad,

To tarnish the hope,

To ruin the good,

To taint the heart,

Tear it in two

And leave it askew 

Forever nothing 

And never more....

Author's Note

This again is not really a poem and it isn't my best peace ether.Please feel free to tell me how to make it better and the grammar mistakes. :)

Reviews

[Kiri Nells]

Whatever expresses emotion in creativity is a poem, so don't bother with saying that it isn't one. Anyway, nice emotional write :)

[Princess LouLou]

Its really good - I like.

[李[A]]

Funny thing is that when I read this title, I first made the connection to the song "Forever Young". Although the thematic elements are similar, they're kind of off. Anyway, it appears as the more I read your writing, the theme gets more and more covert: encouraging a more thorough dissection. Interesting last line; it presents a good wrap up and conclusion to your piece. Good job!

[Tasha]

Wow, this was amazing! I just wanted to keep reading. Wonderful job, and I loved the end.
♥ Ta'Shandra