Held

Held

A Poem by Liz
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There comes a point when all you want is someone who can just carry you through the night, no words, no questions asked, just someone who automatically understands.

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I just wanna be held 
No words, no questions asked, just held. 
I wanna feel the warmth and comfort through this cold dark night
And watch as my world come to a stand still 
How this sombre and gloomy ambiance fades, even if it's only just for a second.
And in that silence, hear a soft breeze whisper that everything will be ok
And feel the universe echo with aplomb

I just wanna be held
Yet I'm afraid that you might be too close within my radius
And I won't be able to hold it together anymore.
Yes, I fear that I'll lose it all in that moment.
That I'll divulge and exude beyond the ambit of my pain
And that you'll descry the holes within my heart
Pain so palpable you won't wanna let go.

But as long as I am held...
My sorrows seem so languished as though dispensed, 
And bisected so that it's almost as though I carry only half the weight.
For a second it's almost as though flashes of rainbow adds some color
And promises sunshine and a frabjous sound in greener pastures soon to come
And brings hope that this too will pass.
I don't wanna be alone, I just wanna be Held

© 2020 Liz


Author's Note

Liz
could you feel the atmosphere created here? If not how could it have been better brought to life?

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sometimes that`s all we need to comfort our souls

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Liz

4 Years Ago

Thank you for taking your time to view
 wordman

4 Years Ago

you`re welcome

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Added on May 5, 2020
Last Updated on May 5, 2020
Tags: comfort, overwhelemed, sad, hope, fear, tears

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Liz
Liz

Johanessburg, Gauteng, South Africa



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I'm passionate about poetry. As a begginer myself, I would like to gain valuable experience through this site and express my thoughts and feelings more..

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