Crimson Tears

This is kinda ancient, but I guess I need something on here.

Crimson Tears

 

Crimson Tears I cry for you

When I cry I go right through

It makes me bleed it hurts so good

In the way I know it should

Crimson Tears that drip for you

Doing things I shouldn't do

When I cry I feel it throttle

Catching my tears in a bottle

Crimson Tears you stop for me

In your eyes it's plain to see

Crimson Tears aren't tears at all

The loss of blood caused me to fall

Crimson Tears are drops of blood

And bleeding eyes are shut for good

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Reviews

[Sunflower 20]

nice, very sad and descriptive but nice. i like the way you formated it to match the name crimson tears.

it also reminded me of "love the way you lie" - by eminem a little bit.
anyay nice job! ^_^