Who i am

I know that you never want

to know who i am.

But baby that is not true

I want to be a part of you.

I love you and that is what i am

and for others i never give a damn

If only you knew how much i love you

if only you knew how much i want you

but alas you will never understand.

My love is pure and

true for sure.

I need you my love,

i am incomplete without you.

You make me what i am today

My love for you is forever.

Someday you will know who i am

Just another stranger and not your Sam...

Author's Note

how was it?

Reviews

[Leslie Philibert]

I like this poem,it has the feeling of a ballad or a song, with simple but effective language,the kind of poetry I like.Good work.

[Irfan Bashir Shah]

Nice poem!

[Amata Luna]

Upon reading your poem I can imagine a man behind the shadows without the woman he loves giving a notice. Yours had the message and a clear imagery of the scene. Obviously a common thing with loving one-sidedly: it feels like you're a stranger to the prince/princess you loved to be. A nice piece of work.

[Coyote Poetry]

A poem with a real story. People can become different with time and bad situation. I like the ending to this excellent poem.
Coyote