"When Twilight Stills The Land"

 

When shadows fall across the Moors

and Twilight stills the land,

we'll meet again at Meadow's Edge,

and go walking hand in hand.

 

When day's hard work is done,

and the Lark settles in it's nest,

when remnants of the Evening Sun,

have finally gone to rest,

 

we'll gaze into each other's eyes,

and tenderly we'll kiss,

and hold each other very close,

for an eve of lover's bliss.

 

We'll walk together, just us two

walking hand in hand,

musing about the things we'll do,

when Twilight stills the land.

 

Ron Cole

June 2007

 

 

 

Reviews

[Brandon Meyers]

This gives me a good smack into memory lane. I come from a pretty rural area, and can put images from memory into every line of this poem. Nice one!

[Valentine]

Another really sweetand good write..I hope that you show this to your wife as well as you can put it upon paper and here for us to read..you have a unique and wonderful talent..Keep them coming..God bless..Valentine

[poddar kushal]

most beautiful. a dazzling rhyme. a vivid imagination. i specially like the part of
" We'll walk together, just us two
walking hand in hand,
musing about the things we'll do,
when Twilight stills the land. "

[Harkness]

Brilliant, there is something pure and innocent about it that i love, it flows so easily. amazing work

[Chrissy]

Oh, how I've missed your writing. Finally life gives me enough time to browse and read these wonderful works.

Just as all your other writings, this is beautiful. As I read it, I felt a warmth that only love can make you feel. You do such a wonderful job making this reader feel what you're writing. Thanks for sharing! Wonderful.

Chrissy

[Sharon Miller Bolander]

What a beautifully peaceful feeling I get reading this one, Ron. It's good to see you at this site. (I'm Peggy Paris from Elite Skills as well as other sites, by the way.) :-) Sharon

[Kara Emily Krantz]

this is bloody fantastic, my dear. I'm sorry I didn't get to it sooner. i so appreciate your little notes. and yes i'm still talking to squirrels. :)

this is just lovely. the flow is perfect... and the way you stole a moment and paused it... just wonderful :)

big hugs

big big hugs :)

[Dead Angel]

awww i love this poem. god i love how you write and ryhme ron!! this poem had great description and the flow of the poem was awesome. excellent work!! :)