Found Wanting

 Ah, the hollow crave...

 

Force the line, to save the pain as it wonders

meanders... through. That slippery slide.

Engrained, is its indifference rendered.

That mocks and talks, two sides. Toss the coin!

 

Choose to lose the gains, heft your banners

splatter, and say. It mattered?

Dare the difference, and drain the dread...

come on! Scream at the Seams.

 

Splendid Karma, drama drips opulently tepid

Dharma, as all is held. To be integral.

Laughter to be heard, as the parade pass

crassly ignorant, sophistication’s.

 

Bitter patter best get at'er, shakes the rattler

before it strikes. It's whoa begone friend.

Pretence the shock, is only stock and trade.

Made, in the shade. Just for you...

 

This promise, bends the corners to peek through

shadows, with the eyes of the multitudes.

Blessings at the alter, falter...

That's the plan,

Toss the coin?

 

Your fame, predeceases you...

Reviews

[Fabian G. Franklin]

I love the flow of this...a bit of fun mixed in the social deprecation...ah, there's the rub, as old shaky spear would say...we are always doing things which we regret for reasons that are unknown to us...at least I am. But I've heard it said that the world is insane...we each just have to draw lines of how much insanity we are willing to withstand from others...or their peculiar type of insanity. I'm crazy but I know it...that helps sometimes. High marks on this my friend.

[Ruth]

Wow! Yes, one of your best I have read :) Your flare with words has always, to me, held experimentalism and that is unique...a shatter laid to the dust but beneath wise travelling feet! I can't tell you how much I have enjoyed reading you today love :)
xoxo

[Rory CJ Frankson]

Thank guys I'm glad you enjoyed it
* Chris ;) happy your reviews are gaining length my Brother. lol

[realmwriter]

Dude I realy like the flow of this piece. Quite the intresting read. Very well done!