Hope

The raising of Consciousness...

 

 

Mindless violence bends

the light, toward a darkened end.

Just as does the longing of heart

yearn, in the ways to peace.

 

Eased from the shadows

hollow form, hiding in between.

Fated futures cannot be retained

in silence, numbed truce.

 

Called whispered choice

pleading, long histories reason.

Echoes reverberate past lonely

screamers, need to know.

 

It holds to some meaning

this path, towards a quickening.

Murmuring winds that do tease

to blend, sendings uttered.

 

Some hope to its promise

remembered, in light upon light.

Five stanzas to give in measures

moment, not surrendered.

Reviews

[sharonlee]

Deep reflections.... gives pause to thoughts of my own. So lovely to find you here at WC


Peace Love & Friendship

[Gobinder Singh Dhindsa]

Really lovely writing! I like whole wording.
Keep it up!
Do you read mine too "Anguish and She"
God bless you!
Lucky!

[realmwriter]

I hope to find the hope that you have found in the light that is shed in these words you write! Very Wonderful piece! And Yes It give me Hope!

[Birdman313]

Hey Rory I'm on AB also and have read some of your poems there also ,, and your poems are always great

[Light and ashes]

Phenomenal poem!

[patricia]

Great visuals. In silence numbed truce...was the line for me...and this path towards a quickening. Just goes to show how an artist can express so much with minimal words. Each line profound. Thankyou

[Chris Smith Welshpoetcs]

Rory, this is outstanding and stuns the reader. A brilliant piece of poetry my friend.

[Coyote Poetry]

"Fated futures cannot be retained
in silence, numbed truce."
No weak words in this poem. Direct to the point poetry. Each set of lines with a purpose and reason. Hope is all we got sometime. Can't surrender and must try to go forward. Outstanding artwork and poetry. Thank you.
Coyote