Sail Asundering Wind

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Nautical Nebulous

 

Whoa, to the Main

Chart the Course

Moan the Pitch, that guide the Whale

oh weary Mariners tale.

Steer the by & by; a Southern Cross.

Moonlight washed the wake astern, and tossed

amongst your pleasures, your seas treasures serve.

Put the I an by

a courses... Measure

Moon-maidens hear me, breathing billow sails go fairing

lays tah the starboard, and I will hum for to muse.

Nary deviate the calendar day, for pleadin

for sea crests love, and fade

the Wave ah Ridin

Onoco Flow

past

Poseidon

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

"Steer the by & by; a Southern Cross
Moonlight washed the wake astern, and tossed
amongst your pleasures, your seas treasures serve."
Amazing words took me to the sea. I like those tales of the sea. If I could be born again. I would be with the sea always. A outstanding poem.
Coyote

[Rossen]

Normally I do not clap after a poem, one time for you [[[[now]]]]

[OT]

I love nautical or sea inspired poems - the mystery of the blue bla bla haha - this was great - you play with the punctuation well I thought - unusual for sure, but I quite like it - makes us think about what we're reading and when to pause rather than assuming where to break ha the sneaky little rhyme is well played too! it alternates nicely - I enjoyed!!

[emmajoy]

I fully appreciate the wording in this but find the punctuation bewildering .. I so want more of this to flow and feel guilty at not feel satisfied .. your creativity usually inspires me.

[Chloe..Across the Unive..]

Ro , anything about the oceans always strikes me .. this poem is strong and such a pleasure to read as I hear the lilt, the accent you used throughout.
Beautiful picture of Poseidon.. and the ship looks so peaceful on calm waters.

Chloe