Absolution eclipsed

Absolution Eclipsed A Chapter by PoppySilver Part Four....   To gaze upon the loneliness of hope   Where waters slow upon woven slide Where mountains rise in mysteries divide We sleep all among the ancient tones Waiting for the re-birth of silent bones. The voices of yore say there's more Drift must we in time's endless door Eye opened by worlds in the third Never to be silenced nor unheard.           The Witness beholds boldly...           Brutalized slaves of no choices Trading ignorance held captives cruelly Cameras snaring begotten frames Peruse demented sickened tainted games   Stretched taunt these links of chain Piteously beg loathing self sob saviour please Hate me I'm nothing on bruising’s knee Shamed dying daily utter unheard of prayers         Atonement is blinded truths       Tainted dreams of lives unsung Where grinding bones stay undone Debt to waste, while pious greed Hands held high in hopes to feed   Delivered daily begotten heart Tongues of truth still impart Wisdom grown in test tube labs Highest bid is up for grabs   Absent of jury       Trial continues And beautiful bellies reek of sex We are all potential suicides A wombed statistic   Sinner   Shamed to the graves As sun bows his head In hollow cave   Absolution eclipsed   This is a storm of bitter days

Reviews

[Rossen]

After that read, I fumble for the words
Impressed again.

[Ashley.M.E]

I really like this poem, the pictures go with it well. I am sorry I haven't been reading much of your writing.

[Trisha]

I was reading a story about our shadow selves. This kind reminds me of what I was reading. Even though their is darkness we must except that part as well because with out that darkness, light would not exist.

You have a unique style that gets me to think deeply about what I am reading. I like that.