Sara's Song

A Beautiful Stranger Sang Souls Serenity

Love at a fair Distance

 

Souls Surrender

 

I sat upon a moonlight ripple
that glide
refractions along
its very edge
the maiden supple recovered
the star
that dance her finger tip
sung sweetly
the light of her lyric wet
falling crescendo
into endless thrall an sail
ethereal tenderness
billowing dress
her caress the dimmer shimmer
I shiver
an evening ends
mooning
lonely
only
dreaming sweet Sara's Song

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Standing in the Waves

The Moon

Molds to Her Wonder
Her Form
Loveliness in True Knowing
... Her Feel of Loneliness ...

Real & Sang

Moonlight & Wave
Searching
... Spirit Themes ...

Shyly

Author's Note

Divinity assembles Beauty never seen... but Imagined.

Reviews

[Augustus]

Magical, mystical write...It transported me from this world into one where fancy reigns supreme... Very very elegantly penned indeed! The beginning is so wonderfully mesmerizing! "I sat upon a moonlight ripple".... Wow! You weave magic through words...
"ethereal tenderness
billowing dress
her caress the dimmer shimmer
I shiver
an evening ends
mooning
lonely
only
dreaming sweet Sara's Song"
....Astonishingly brilliant...fantastic flow...like a flowing river, like a melodious song...
Enchanting write!

[James Watts]

I loved this one, my friend. There was a romantic longing in this that this aching heart of mine was able to connect with. Excellent work.

[J.Black]

Sigh. Radiohead "Fake Plastic Trees"... when I heard that start to play... reading... I just knew it was going to be wonderful! You're created magic, the same one I eat out of the palm of your hands! Great imagery and choice of words!

[Desert Dreamer]

"I sat upon a moonlight ripple" goes very well with the blue images and makes me imagine sitting upon a ray of moonlight and observing.

[sayandeep kundu]

Intense.. magical...made me dip into my reverie....

[Gandré]

a nice dream of innocence! I would post this as 2 poems. for I am in the first part of it ... and yet I have to read after the picture... the second one.. and I think the 2nd one gets not enough attention. good job, a positive thought is what we need. 100p - you disabled rating...

[A.Lee]

"I sat upon a moonlight ripple" That line reminded me of "Once upon a midnight dreary". Nice work. This one had a very fluid feel to it.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you for the beautiful photos and words. The description made the photos come alive. The story was a pleasure to read. Water and woman always can create a beautiful story. A excellent poem.
Coyote

[Luna Northstar]

Magical... mystical... and amazing.... great job :)

[zombiikillah666]

very beautiful.
an i love radiohead. (:

[Ruth]

The eternal and universal are beautiful in your work love
This is intensely vivid and capturing!
xx