I wonder if this poem caused my heart to pulse faster..
Anyway, the flow is really good, I could almost use it as song lyrics in my head.
One little detail you might have overlooked:
'You are in every though I have and every breath I take..': I think you meant 'thought' instead of 'though'.
Well done!
Very very nice. My interpretation is that it's coming from someone who has had heartache in the past but hasn't shut the door on love and is taking it one day at a time while still protecting her heart.
I really enjoyed the flow, and it had a simplicity to it...the words seemed to come directly from your heart,, an honesty that was apparent. Beautiful.
Beautiful and hopeful words for love.
"You are in every though I have and every breath I take..
And my feelings are only getting stronger with each promise we make..."
The above lines are true. Love is growing closer and finding new places to celebrate love. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote
Posted 8 Years Ago
8 Years Ago
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