Giving you my heart...

Giving you my heart...

A Poem by Romalina
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This is for everyone who has ever fallen in love...

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You are the first thing I think of each morning when I rise..
The last thing that comes to my mind before I close my eyes...

You are in every though I have and every breath I take..
And my feelings are only getting stronger with each promise we make...

I will prove that I really love you but that is the hardest part..
So for now I am giving you all I can..

I am giving you my heart.

© 2015 Romalina


Author's Note

Romalina
Please do leave a review if you liked it :)

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Romalina

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A very romantic thought! i appreciate your efforts and your beautiful feelings to make a well crafted piece of art... thanks to share with us

Posted 8 Years Ago


I wonder if this poem caused my heart to pulse faster..
Anyway, the flow is really good, I could almost use it as song lyrics in my head.
One little detail you might have overlooked:
'You are in every though I have and every breath I take..': I think you meant 'thought' instead of 'though'.
Well done!

Posted 8 Years Ago


This is just sooo good.
I would like to come up with poems like these instantly to recite to my crush haha :) :) :)
Well done!

Posted 8 Years Ago


It is hard to define love in words but you effectively managed to pull right string of thoughts. Thanks for sharing :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


I love it , i can how you feel in each stanza

Posted 8 Years Ago


Very very nice. My interpretation is that it's coming from someone who has had heartache in the past but hasn't shut the door on love and is taking it one day at a time while still protecting her heart.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Pretty much describes the ultimate elusive heaven on earth
...but that's just my opinion.

Thanks for the beautiful share

Posted 8 Years Ago


I really enjoyed the flow, and it had a simplicity to it...the words seemed to come directly from your heart,, an honesty that was apparent. Beautiful.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Beautiful and hopeful words for love.
"You are in every though I have and every breath I take..
And my feelings are only getting stronger with each promise we make..."
The above lines are true. Love is growing closer and finding new places to celebrate love. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 8 Years Ago


Romalina

8 Years Ago

Thank you for taking out the time to review this :) I really appreciate this.
Coyote Poetry

8 Years Ago

You are welcome.

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Added on December 17, 2015
Last Updated on December 17, 2015
Tags: love, romance, feelings, heart

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