Satin and Silk

Satin and Silk

A Poem by RomaJ

What keeps me awake at night?

The glow
of soft golden flames
flickering in the night

casting shadows
of Silhouettes
dancing
in its wavering, light

It's the sweet,
melodic hum
of a vast,
tranquil ocean
Swaying,
in harmonic rhythms

As lovers dance, in a sea of satin and silk

fingers clasping
bodies rising
falling
arching
in rapturous waves
colliding

As lovers dance, in a sea of satin and silk






© 2015 RomaJ


Author's Note

RomaJ
A "what keeps me awake at night" challenge #Prose

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like liquid silk the waves crash upon your satiny shore...very sensual poem:) liked it very much!!

Posted 9 Years Ago


RomaJ

9 Years Ago

That sounds so lovely Terry. Thank you for your thoughts.
terry smith

9 Years Ago

:)...................
part of this reminds me of "Patterns" by simon and Garfunkel...

"casting shimmering shadows on the houses through the trees....paints a pattern on my wall, like the pieces of a puzzle. or a child's uneven scrawl>

nicely done...I like the passion flickering in the room and in the hearts.

Posted 9 Years Ago


RomaJ

9 Years Ago

Thank you Jacob. for sharing that, I have heard of Simon and Garfunkel. I will listen to that song. .. read more
RomaJ

9 Years Ago

Very beautiful song, Jacob. I'm glad to have heard it.
Nice visions to dream by... any time.

Posted 9 Years Ago


RomaJ

9 Years Ago

Thank you Chris. I appreciate it.
a beautiful poem of love,and you worded it so well

Posted 9 Years Ago


RomaJ

9 Years Ago

thank you wordman:)
 wordman

9 Years Ago

you are welcome roma
Wow Who would want to sleep through this lover's dance on satin and silk sheets . Fantastic romantic poem. Loved this so much:) Breathtaking!

Posted 9 Years Ago


RomaJ

9 Years Ago

Thank you and I'm glad you liked it.
That might keep me awake nights too. Valentine

Posted 9 Years Ago


RomaJ

9 Years Ago

Thank you, Valentine.

indeed. It makes the nights, even more wondrous
If I ever have trouble sleeping then this is the kind of trouble I hope that finds me. Uber sensual and I love the way you played with the challenge. Beautifully lush writing Roma J.
The fireplace imagery makes this a hot tamale.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

RomaJ

9 Years Ago

Thank you so much, Anto. I must confess, I changed two of the words. "Harmonious rhythms" hope it st.. read more
ANTO

9 Years Ago

It reads just fine with the change Roma J.
RomaJ

9 Years Ago

Thank you, Anto:)

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